Story 194 Part Four Background.

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                                                                                        Written by Reshma.

          Yes, I know, I didn’t write or publish this story, our new writer Mary did but we’ve decided not to burden her with the extra writing of backgrounds, instead just concentrate on getting her story sections ready.

          By the time Mary got to this section, we were well underway with the writing of Katrina’s Wedding. She was able to read our notes and parts we had completed and she used that to write Betty’s view of the wedding. That took up the first part of her story, the non-sexy part. What she wrote here, also had an effect on our story, we found ourselves making changes to our work as well. For example, we had written that the wedding train had arrived in the main town. Mary and Susan made it into a temporary station on the other side of the river. Remember we had always had the club/hotel placed in the town too until Asami moved it across the river in Story 187 Part Two.

         Now came that big sex scene where these two horny older women managed to arrange a night with a hot, sexy younger guy. In Mary’s case, she worked from her own experience again. One night, Mary and a friend called Deanna arranged to spend their night with a guy called Paul. You'll know Paul from the comments he makes in this blog. What appears in this story is said to be closely based on that night. I even hear that Mary consulted but Deanna and Paul as she wrote this section. Once again the end result was cleaned up with the help of our sex scene expert, Susan (Sexy Sue). 

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