Posted by Allan.
This story must be one of the older ones from this section. We believe that Anne might have written the original version but for some reason, her diary doesn’t record this. Later when Ayaka began reviewing this volume, she felt there was more needed. So I was given the job of improving it.
First, the basic story had a good make-over, changing small parts, improving conversation etc. Then the idea of using Katrina more came up; I think Shandra suggested that. She felt more could be done with Katrina as she was young and active, excited about her new sexual freedom. So that became the idea of her escaping from the boys and being chased around the pool.
By this time Susan was working on a new story which will follow this one, ‘Naughtier Swimming’ its now called. At one point that was intended to replace this one completely but it was finally decided to keep both stories, having two separate swims in the one evening. As Susan wrote her story, she decided to include the Motel Manager and his wife so I added them here as well.
The ideas of ducking each other came from the way we are sometimes in pools. Often the girls are trying to duck one of us. One nude night we did do some fun stuff by catch each other and stripping them rather than undressing ourselves. That gave some amusement to others at the pools too. So as is often the case, this story has some fact about us behind it.
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