Story 78 Background

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                                                                                                                    Posted by Susan

         So when Hansini and Mootie decided to swap partners with Brian and Mega we needed a writer to cover the second story between Mootie and Mega. At that point, we decided on Mootie as his wife Hansini was already involved in writing. So to add interest, in the first story, Story 76, we added that conversation between Amita and Hansini as to who would do it but we were careful not to say who. Finally, at the start of this letter, Amita reveals the person’s name as Mootie.

       Most of this story was written in late 2008 but in 2013 when Rajah began writing his first story he was having trouble getting started as he explained in his background notes for Story 74. We decided that Mootie, being an outdoor man might have the same trouble. Rajah came up with this interesting paragraph about writing being hard work, which we added as the opening to this story.

       The first thing I did was develop that conversation between Hansini and Mega which led to partner swapping. The approach I decided on was them discussing playing a game, then talking about Letter 57 where a game was played for sex. In this case, the game never actually took place since there were only two couples anyway, but it was a good way to start a sexy conversation, a way which to me sounded like it may happen. Notice how I allowed the girls to arrange it all with both guys remaining silent, just listening. This is how it often happens here in this house for real too. 

        While I was doing all this opening stuff, Shandra had already started working on her sex scenes in Story 76, so after reading what she had written I began on my sex scenes. There is nothing too unusual about the sex. It had to be fairly good but not outstanding, it also had to appear to have been written by a guy. One thing I did add, was both admitting they had never had sex with anyone other than their spouses.

       Finally, we come to that last bit about the new tourist attraction at the Game Reserve. This was added in a lot later in 2012 when Anne was writing a story from Vol 11 called Shanti’s Retreat. That later story involves the crocodile again. This is the crocodile which Shanti killed back in Letter 54. So even though he has been dead a long time that crocodile still keeps coming back into our stories.

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Story 77 Mothers Know Everything

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Hi from the New Zealand Team. Shanti here. 
            We all send our regards to the Indian Team. Most of all we want to say a big thank you to Hansini for another good story. We all enjoyed it a lot.

            That evening you, Hansini and Brian were together, I hear Mootie and Mega were together as well, also having a separate sexy adventure. I understand this is coming in your next letter, but there is one question we are all wondering about. Who will write that story, Mootie or Mega?           

            I did some looking for an adult – clothing optional resort that could cater for smaller children, but they are almost impossible to find. Obviously, adult resorts and children do not go together and so I had almost given up on the idea.
           Then I got a phone call from Sharon. It seems Steve has also been doing some research on the internet and we think we have found a resort in Australia, which caters for families and children but also has an adult side as well. They advertise very good childcare services, so parents can get away and relax as well. Sounds like just what we are looking for doesn't it.

            We have sent an e-mail to them asking for more details and the possibility of booking a large group in February next year. At present, we are waiting to hear back from them. As soon as we do, we will contact you. So are you guys OK for us to book in February?

            Now over to Lizamoa who has a story to tell you. 

Story 77 Background

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                                                                                                     Posted by Anne

         This is one of the feature stories of the Letters Series. There has been an amazing amount of work spent on it for such a short story. I believe the original version was written in mid-2008 then it had a major rebuild in 2010. More recently in 2013, more work was done.

         You could say this is an addition to our earlier Letter 43 Shanti was Painfully Shy. Certainly, I believe it would be worth reading that one before you continued with this one here. You might also like to read Letter - 56 Story Night in the section talking about Letter 43 where Mike and Shanti are still sure her parents never found out about their sexual relationship.  
         Basely the story is about Shanti discovering her parents knew about her and Mike’s sexual relationship almost from the beginning. We learn how they decided not to confront her about it when they realised how happy she was and how much this had improved her speech problems. They sound like fairly modern Indian parents if you ask me. I'm not sure Shandra's parents, certainly not her mother, would have been so understanding. This story is also unusual in that there is a small poem included as well.  

        The major changes made in 2010 was the scene where Shanti retrieves her ‘treasures’ and the idea of Greeshma going to live with Shanti’s parents. The reason for this second change will be revealed when we get to the other 2010 stories in Vol Ten. The poem was added at this point too,

        Later, in 2013, some of us had another go at the story. Our intention was to make it into a story that flowed better when read aloud. Not much was changed in the basic structure of the story but there were many minor changes, particularly to the conversations etc.

       Finally, Kim added that piece where Greeshma admits she watched Lizamoa and Peter having sex in the mud. In his story, (Letter/Story 73), Joseph had wondered how much she knew. Kim wanted to keep the fact Greeshma was watching secret in her story and then get Greeshma to admit she was watching, here in this story.

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Story 76 An Evening to Remember – Part One.

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Forward to  Story 77          Special Event - 200 Posts

           Hi from India. It is Amita here.

            The Indian Team saying hi to you and we wish to hear all our friends in The New Zealand Team are well and in the best of good health. 

            First I need to tell you about Sarvesh’s and my news. The baby was born three weeks ago and we have a lovely little boy who we have decided to call Vishva. Steven will be his Western name. He is such a beautiful baby although I suppose being his mother I am a bit biased about that too.

            We are doing some changes in the house and there are builders working on a nursery for him. I know it will be a long time before he will be able to sleep in his own room but we are doing the building now since Sarvesh has some workmen free from other projects at the moment.

            We are also taking the chance to make another room for a nanny. I want to have someone to help me look after the baby. Sarvesh had the idea to ask Katrina so he talked with our House Manager who also thought she was a good choice. Last night we had a staff meeting and announced Katrina’s new role within the house. She is very pleased to be helping me. She started her new duties today.

            Having her own room within the house instead of sharing a room in the servants’ quarters will be good for her too. I am sure she is very happy with this. It also means we have a very good excuse for her to stay on during our special weekends as we still need someone to look after the baby.   

Story 76 Background

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                                                                                                                        Posted by Shandra

        In the opening by Amita, I added a bit about Amita and Sarvesh accepting the idea but not being sure if a suitable adult resort can be found. This is moving us towards the adult resort stories of Volume 7.  I also took the chance to add some support material to my series of stories about Katrina. When Amita has her child, Katrina, gets promoted to the position of nanny and she moves to her own room in the big house next to the nursery. This, of course, has obvious benefits for them in having her attending the special weekends to ‘take care of the baby.’       

           Once this was out of the way, I changed to Hansini telling us about how she and Mootie got into partner swapping with Brian and Mega. But notice I don’t actually tell how it happened. This was a big step forward for both couples so we wanted to cover this in two stories. This week I covered what happened between Hansini and Brian. In two weeks’ time, Susan will publish her story of Mootie and Mega together.

          Since Susan had already written about how they decided to try swapping, I decided just to skip over it and leave it to her. Unfortunately, you will need to wait two weeks until you find out how it happened. Ha Ha.    

         The sex was good. I’m not sure if those three orgasms together are entirely believable but it worked in the story. (It would work for me too. LOL) I didn’t go out of my way to make the sex scenes too good as they were written by someone not so experienced at writing, particularly since she was writing in English. I personally think the best part was when he took her bra and panties off in front of the mirror. I think this idea could be worth exploring sometime in a future story.

         What I did want to cover was how these two stories came to be written. I wrote about how Amita and Hansini met in town and discussed how these stories could be written and added to the letters book. We will see how well this going in two weeks’ time. 

         Next week we have an interesting story by Anne called “Mothers Know Everything.”

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Story 75 What About Going to an Adult Resort?

200th Permanent Post!!!
75th Letter!!!!

A major milestone for the Letters Project.





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            Hi from the New Zealand team in New Zealand to the Indian team of course in India. We hope you are all doing well. It has been a while since we heard from you and even longer since we wrote to you. Here in New Zealand, everyone is doing well and they all send their love.

            You must be very close now to having your baby Amita. We were surprised to read in your E-mail that in India they are not allowed to tell you if it’s a boy or girl, and even more surprised at the reason why. Do they really kill the babies if they are girls? I felt the same as you Amita when I was expecting our first child we were happy to have either. Even when we found out it was a girl we were both still happy. In fact, I think Mike was even happier because he has always said he wanted a beautiful daughter. Wait until she becomes a teenager, then we’ll see if he still likes having a daughter.

            Which reminds me, as if I need any reminding, I am only a month away myself now. I had a scan the other day and this time we are going to get a boy. That will be good because we are only intending to have two children and so having a boy and a girl will be good.

            And Joseph will tell you I have been a very good girl this time and there has been no complaining about being pregnant from me. Well not much complaining anyway.           

Story 75 Background

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                                                                               Posted by Allan

         As Anne says in her special post above this post marks 200 permanent posts in this blog. It is a big milestone for us and even now when I look back through the various stories I am amazed how much we have done and how far we have come. But there is a lot more yet. It's hard to be sure but Anne believes we are not yet halfway through the Letters Story.
         It seems like I get left with many of those little fill-in stories which tie all the main letters together. This is another one of those, not sexy, no story but still needed. When this one was dumped on to me I was only given one goal – suggest going to a nude resort. No instructions as to who suggested it or any of the details as to where, so I just had to wing it as I went alone. Of course, as the series continued this Letter was modified to support the surrounding themes.

        So I decided to give the suggestion to Steve but to link it to something Sarvesh suggested in Letter 60. Of course, I had to go back to that letter and add it in there too. I talked to Anne and we tried looking for a suitable resort but couldn’t find a real one. We decided to write this fruitless search into the story as well so you will notice it will take a few letters until the resort is actually located.      

        So once I had the main point of my letter in place, I needed something to fatten it up so I added in the news at the beginning. This, of course, the main theme here was about babies which is kind of interesting considering this was written in Dec 2008. Now years later when we are publishing the main theme in our real life is babies since three of the writers are pregnant.
        We also wanted to added an introduction to the series of camping stories others in the team were writing. The idea was that Joseph finds this camping ground which caters for nudists.  This will set up a new short series which will happen over the Christmas period before we get to the overseas adult resort stories.

        Yes in case you are wondering the sexy stories will be back next week. 

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Story 74 Part C Fun in the Guest House.

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Part B – Sarvesh and Mandara Had Fun Too.

        You will remember how in the first part of this story, Amita and Mandara decided to swap husbands for sex. Then in the second part, we saw how Jeevan and Amita did in the first bedroom. Now in this, the third and final part, we follow Mandara and Sarvesh into the second bedroom.

Hi, Sarvesh and Mandara here.
Sarvesh:-

        Someone needs to complete Amita’s story since she does not know the details of what happened with us. I talked with Mandara about this and she suggested we do it together like we did for those earlier stories of Letter 57. We met at the warehouse office where Amita would not know and this is the story we wrote.
        What we didn't know was that while Mandara was in my office, my wife was in Jeevan's office with him. That is until one day, Mandara and I walked out of my office to come face to face with Jeevan and Amita leaving his office. We sat in the office lunchroom having a coffee while we laughed about our attempts to hide our writing from each other.

Story 74 Part C Background

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                                                                               Posted by Rajah

        So finally we come to the last section of my story. I had intended to publish the whole story at once with just three headings for each section but a meeting of the writing team decided the story should be divided. We quickly saw that two sections would not work so a three-section format was finally decided on. 

       The final section of my story is about Sarvesh and Mandara. Like I said last week, I wanted to capture him wanting to rush in while she wanted to hang back, take the time to enjoy the sexual build up to full intercourse and great orgasms. It was interesting seeing how this worked out between these two sexual partners. I must confess it sort of surprised me as well and I was writing it too. The contrast of sexual styles is an interesting subject which has caught my attention in many of these stories.

        I have done this having slow sex with the girls just to try. It is surprising how each of them reacted. I must say Ayaka is the most amusing. She became frustrated, almost angry with me. When she complained I started to laugh which didn’t exactly help either. That night we messed it up between us. 

       About this same time as I began this story, young Ayaka wrote a story herself. See it in Letter/Story 65. I really liked what she did with that one. It was sexy and built to a great session of sexy exhibitionism on the beach. I knew Anne had decided to place that story earlier in the blog before my one here was published so I could consider her story to be known by the characters.  I decided to take her scene and build it into a fantasy scene here in my story.

        One night I was lying in bed with Shandra and we were talking about this scene.  I confessed I was a bit unsure how to begin this part of my story so we began talking about it of how we can introduce this scene.

        Suddenly she said, “Here let me show you.”

       What happened next was almost the same as what happened in the story where we began with the idea of Ayaka’s story and built it into our own fantasy. It was exciting doing that and I must admit the sex that followed was good for both of us too. After we finished, we turned the light on and began making notes of what we had done. These notes became my guide for the fantasy scene in my story. So you could say this scene was written during a session of hot sex.      Ayaka you didn’t know that, did you? That we didn’t just write about your sex scene, Shandra and I actually acted it out first.

       When I got time a few days later I went back through and typed it up on the computer. At this point, I began developing the story into a conversation between Sarvesh and Mandara. Later others cleaned it up and completed it as you see it here.

       So they did this in the story next morning and like I said above my scene went a lot further than the one Ayaka wrote. As I was working on it I talked with Ayaka about it. She was pleased with what I was doing and really liked the finished scene. (I learnt just before publishing that you, Ayaka, had a big hand in the final editing. Thank you.) 

        So that was my first attempt at a full story myself. As I said in the first background two weeks ago, I never got it finished before events in my personal life overtook me. Allan, Susan and Anne completed it, then Kim and Ayaka did their bits and Reshma did some too, and not to forget my wife Shandra who gave lots of advice, but I am pleased with the final result. That is what counts in the end, a good story we can all enjoy.

       I was not sure I would get to do another one since as the blog grows and becomes more complex there is an ever increasing workload keeping it running as we want it. I thought the future of my writing would be adding smaller parts to letters as we continue rather than doing another full story myself. But in the last few days, that has changed. I am starting on a combined story with Reshma. We will see how this develops in the next few weeks.

        So I hope you enjoyed it and found something new in my story.

        Anne has asked me to tell you, next week we have a very short story where the question is asked, “What about going to an adult resort?”

       This story will not be too sexy but is very important as it begins the final build-up towards the adult resort stories.  It also tidies up some loose details in the lives of some of the characters.

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Story 74 Part B Fun in the Guest House.

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Part B – What Jeevan and I Did Together.

        Jeevan followed me up to the bedroom. We both just wore bathrobes since we’d come directly from the spa pool. I threw mine off, allowing it to fall to the floor as I jumped on the bed. I lay back against the pillow watching him. What happened next was a surprise for me.
        Taking a small bag he disappeared into the bathroom. Before long I heard he was cleaning his teeth! A bit later he returned and sat down at the dresser. I could see he was watching me so my hands moved to my breasts, to my nipples. But he didn’t make a move towards me instead, continuing to brush his hair. I now decided to take things further as my hand moved to my pussy, stroking it, opening my lips, showing him how ready I was for him. But although he was watching me in the mirror he still didn’t get up. It almost looked like he was preparing to go out rather than preparing to go to bed. That thought made me laugh.
        He looked up at me in the mirror when he heard that.
        “What?” he asked.
        “Oh nothing,” I replied. “Just watching you.”
        “Won’t be long. I’m almost finished.”

Story 74 Part B Background

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                                                                               Posted by Rajah

        So last week I finished my background notes without answering the question where the idea for this story came from. This will be my purpose for this week.

        I was reading through the various stories trying to get some ideas for my story and suddenly I discovered that Jeevan and Mandara had never swapped partners with Sarvesh and Amita. This surprised me because they are supposed to be close friends. Since just a bit later in this volume Hansini and Mootie swap with Mega and Brian I thought a story such as this would fit nicely in here.

       I pointed out this oversight to Anne and suggested this would be a suitable location for such a story. She thought it was a good idea but she did warn me that what I intended was actually a big effort for a first story. I soon discovered that for myself as I had explained last week. So you can see that I not only decided on the subject of my story I even got to decide on the location as well. Here is it the opening story for Vol 6. 
       What I neglected to see was that during this time Amita was expected to be pregnant. My wife Shandra pointed it out to me after I had finished that intense sex scene. We took the matter to Anne and she said it would be Ok as we could say Amita was early in her pregnancy. This was written into the story.

        Last week we saw the opening scenes. I wanted to do something different for my opening so I jumped you straight into that conversation between Mandara and Amita. I then explained what was going on after that. The next part was Hansini and Mega finding out about what was going on too. Again I did this using conversation between the four girls.

        This, of course, led to the sexy shower the climax of that first section. I knew both girls had an interest in being with a woman so they would have no problems doing it again. I also knew that many of us guys find a woman in a sari under the shower to be very sexy. It made sense to combine both these ideas into that sexy shower session. Two sexy women in their colourful saris, soaking wet, enjoying each other. What could be better than that?

         Later Susan added in that little standoff between Amita and Sarvesh. Susan, why do you have to pick on us Indian guys? It seems you think we are all too bossy with our women, treating them badly. While this might be the case with some men, not just Indian men either I might add, but it certainly does not need to be for all Indian men. Well, you did a good job of this as it added a new view of this couple. I added that frown Amita gave her husband warning him not to over-ride her plans to further develop Susan’s idea. And I do like that line of Susan's where Sarvesh says, 'Sorry my friend, as much as I like you, I would rather have you wife in bed with me tonight.' Good one, girl!

         In the section published this week, we get to read what Amita and Jeevan did. At first, I was only going to get Amita to tell the story and then let Mandara take over for the last section but my wife Shandra suggested I use the guy's view as well. That is why Jeevan takes over part of this story. She is right, this had worked well in the Domino Stories too back in Letter 57.

        One of the important themes I had almost from the beginning was to show Sarvesh and his wife Amita as being more sexually aggressive, in a rush to get into full intercourse while Jeevan and is his wife Mandara would be more laid back, as we would say in New Zealand, slowly building towards full sex in a very relaxed manner. This is what you did Anne back in Letter 57 – Story Four so I wanted to continue with this, to capture this meeting of different ways of taking sex as well and see where it took us.

        Yes, I am happy my story has done this well both in this section which you can read today and in the one next week as well.

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Story 74 Part A Fun in the Guest House.

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Part A – I Want to Do Something Different.

        “I want to do something different.”
        “Different? Like what?”
        “Something exciting... more sexy... For our special weekends.”
        “Sexy? Sounds interesting,” I (Amita) said.
        “Remember what we did when the New Zealanders were here?” Mandara said. “I would like to try that again. You know... The swapping... For the sex-games.”
        “The partner swapping? Yes, I liked that... It was fun.”
        “Well, maybe we can do it again, Amita?”
        “You mean among us... Here in India?”
        “Yes... Yes, when we come to your house... When you hold the next nude day.”
        “But Mandara, I don’t think the other two couples would be willing.”
        “We don’t need to have them involved. Just us... and our husbands, of course.”
        “OK, I know the boys will be keen... so we don’t need to ask them.”
        “Let’s surprise them?”
        "Yes," I agreed. "It will be a nice surprise."

Story 74 Part A Background.

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                                                                               Posted by Rajah

Hi! My name is Rajah, Shandra’s husband.

        Up until I wrote this story much of my work on the Letters Project involved admin type work. It is my job to publish every Friday and take care of various problems so the main writers could continue their good work.

        One day we were considering this section covered by the old Vol 5 and the idea came about to split it into two volumes which became the final Vol 5 and Vol 6. During the process, this section was expanded by moving stories around and adding a number of new ones.

       At the meeting to decide this, the idea came up for each of us newer writers to do a story. So Kim, Ayaka and myself, each took a story to develop and write as our own. Ayaka got her one done quickly, taking only a few days (Letter/Story 65), Kim was working on one involving rain and mud, which was published last week (Letter/Story 73). I then had mine set in India with some partner swapping but I was having trouble with it.

        Shandra suggested that I write down an outline of the whole story and then treat each smaller section as a complete story. This was working and as I gathered the notes and ideas I could just add various parts into the story. 

        As this process continued young Ayaka wanted to get involved and give me lots of advice. Just because she finished her story quickly, in only a few days, seemed to make her think she was an expert. But I wanted to do this myself. I think I was making steady process and if I had more time I would have finished it too.

        Unfortunately, it was not to be, as events in my personal life overtook me. Soon the wedding between Shandra and myself was rushing up. We became very preoccupied with the details of this and so not much further writing was being done. Then after the wedding, there were the many tasks involved in preparing my business to be left while I was away in India showing my wife to my family members there.

       Also during this period, that fault was discovered in the HTML code on the index page. Susan had been copying the format as she worked down the page. It seems like a good idea at the time but it actually created a ‘bomb’ waiting to go off. One day we went on-line to discover font size and double spaced issues all over the way down the page. There was no quick answer; I had to deal with each problem, one by one by one as I worked down the page. This took me a lot of time too.

        Now when I was getting ready to leave for India, Anne informed me she and Susan were willing to complete my story using my notes. I knew there were some other projects waiting for me when I got back; I also knew I would be busy with my business, so I gave them my permission to continue. 

       They must have worked fast because I had only been in India two weeks when I came to learn my story was finished. I do notice they were careful to follow my outline so what they completed was very much as I intended. They even seemed to have followed my writing style as well because now it’s hard to say which parts are theirs and which are mine. Anne sent it to me while I was in India, I had time to go over it making final adjustments as I wanted them and then we called the job finished.

       Later the uploading team of Kim and Ayaka came through and did their little bits in the story and Reshma my sister-in-law has done some too. So you can see I am unable to take full credit for this story even if it is attached to my name. But I am very happy with it and I hope you are too. Oh, Allan, I suppose you were in there somewhere too.    
       I really like that opening conversation where we are left to figure out for ourselves who is talking. I don't know who did it that way but it's a good idea.

       Next week I am going to again do the background in which I will be more informing about the story itself and where the ideas came from.

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Story/Letter 73 Mud, Rain and Sex.

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Update and Makeover - 2021.

          When Anne, Susan and I joined the website Literotica, we began publishing some of our stories there. During this process, the stories were improved from what they are here. As long as they didn't change things too much, we've decided to include these better-upgraded stories, replacing the original ones with their newer versions.
                    Kim.

Hi, Joseph here.
          Oh, Amita! Who is a naughty girl? And doing that to shock poor Katrina too. I hope you cleaned the table before breakfast. I must admit having your friends standing around watching was interesting too. Like some of the things, we did in India.
          Please tell Katrina I personally enjoyed her story. Forward to Letter 70 Part A. I hear that it might continue. Well, I am looking forward to that too. Nice work Katrina. Sure I know you got some help from others but it was your heart in it. I could see that.
          Now I must get on as I have a very big story for you this week.

Letter/Story 73 Background.

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                                                                               Posted by Kim

Hi, Kim here.

         Ayaka began writing a complete story by herself, (see Letter/Story 65) and so I decided to try one as well. I played with a few ideas and then in early April 2013 something happened that gave me what I needed to begin writing.

        Let me explain. Since Christmas 2013 there had been almost no rain and by the end of March things on the farm were beginning to get very bad. As milk production plunged it was looking like the farm was going to make a loss for the year which was the last thing Anne wanted for her first season.  Anne and Allan were even considering pulling the plug on milking and drying the herd off to protect the stock for next season. At that time we also had visitors, Anne’s parents and Ayaka’s parents were both staying with us on the farm.

        One day we were sitting around the table when it started to rain. Not that heavy, more a steady drizzle than heavy rain but that was just what the dry, parched pasture needed. Anne was so thrilled she jumped up from the table and ran outside with Allan close behind her. By the time I got out there they were standing out in the rain on the lawn hugging each other.

       Suddenly Shandra who was standing beside me gave a yell and ran out to join them. She jumped up at them, catching them both by surprise and knocking them over. The lawn, which by now had almost no grass, had quickly turned to mud, so there were the three of them rolling in the rain and mud. It was funny to watch them, we were laughing until they looked up and saw us.

      “Come and join us,” Anne called.

       Susan went straight away, running out to join them, slipping in the mud and landing on top of Allan. That was not the most graceful way of doing it, I must say.
       I looked at Ayaka, she looked at me and we both laughed again. I dropped my watch onto the deck chair and we both ran out to join them in the rain. We pushed each other over, threw mud at each other and were having great fun until soon we were as wet and muddy as they were. Then we looked up and saw our visitors standing under shelter on the deck watching us. 

        We realised how shocked they must have been as we got up out of the mud and went back to the house. Of course, we were too muddy to go inside so Anne’s mum went and got us some towels. Ayaka’s dad took the hose and sprayed us taking off as much mud as he could, then we each went around the side of the house where we could strip off our clothes and wrap ourselves in a towel before we went inside for a shower. That might have been a bit sexy for him hosing us, seeing us girls in soaking wet clothes. My blouse had become a bit see-through and I wasn't wearing a bra. He must have noticed my hard nipples.

        Later, sitting around the table having a hot drink, Anne asked her father, “Did we shock you, Dad?”

        “No honey,” he laughed. “Not with you Anne. We’ve come to expect anything could happen when we come here.”

        She wasn’t sure how to take that at first until Allan started to laugh. Soon we were all laughing.

        Little does he know just how true those words actually are. LOL. With Anne, Susan and Shandra anything could happen when they get going. And often it does too!     

         So that inspired me to write this week’s story. Since it could fit almost any time after Joseph and Lizamoa had moved to New Zealand we decided to place it here, even though the stories around it had been written late in 2008.
       I did get some help with the landscaping part. Anne and Allan suggested much of those details. I went to get Susan to check the sex scene. She made a few suggestions to help. Shandra wanted Joseph to see his wife with her beautiful hair in a puddle of mud so I added that. Ayaka suggested that key moment where Shanti throws mud at Joseph to start the fight. Reshma cleaned up some of the grammar for me as well. Finally, Anne asked me to include that little conversation between Lizamoa and her mother-in-law. This is to start preparing for a future story which was finally published in Sept 2015, Vol 11. Thank you all guys.

       So finally one of my stories gets published as well. I’m very pleased with it and I hope you enjoy it too.

              Kim. 

        Anne has asked me to add that this brings us to the end of Vol 5. Next week we will move into Vol 6 which will open with Rajah’s very first story for the Letter’s Project.   

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Letter/Story 72 A Good Point / Table Antics.

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Hi from India.
          Thanks for your letter and quick reply. And also thanks for another good story about those cheeky young guys in the tree house. Yes, it is a pity you couldn’t use them because they took such good photos too. We all enjoyed their photos as well. All so those ones of you on the table Liz. Very sexy doing it there!

          Now before we get into anything else let us talk about those comments you made in your last letter Shanti. They were good points, Sarvesh and I, for that matter all of us over here are in full agreement with you. Yes, we did take things a bit far and we took a big risk too. We realised that now and that is part of the reason why we quickly decided not to replace Elizabeth. We have also been in contact with her again and Sarvesh has been able to offer her a job at the bank. This was partly because of what happened but also she has the right skills for the job as well.