Letter/Story 63 We Are Coming to New Zealand. - Part A

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Part A – Meeting Mootie and Hansini

Dear Readers of Letters.
            It is Joseph here. Hi from India.
            It seems like this will be the last time I will be able to write “Hi from India.” Very soon I will need to be writing “Hi from New Zealand.” There are now only four days before we leave India. I am not sure we will get time to complete this story before we leave.

          (Editor Note: - Actually most of this story was completed before Joseph and Lizamoa moved to New Zealand so 'Hi from India' is probably correct. It appears Joseph might have written the opening section about his new job 3 weeks before their departure while the main story was started about four days before departure and finished in New Zealand.) 

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                                                                        Posted by Anne.
         We had decided it was time to end the Letters Series with Joseph and Lizamoa moving to New Zealand. The idea was that once they were in New Zealand writing letters to each other would no longer be necessary so the Story would end there. This story was originally designed to be the big ending for the series featuring a farewell party and their move to New Zealand. But then as I began to write things changed.

         We were talking, over a meal, one night and the subject came up again.

         Shandra said, “I’m going to miss writing when the series ends.”

         I agreed with her saying, “Yes I feel the same way.”

        “Then why are you stopping?” Allan asked us.

        “What do you mean?” I asked him.

        “You do not need to stop writing. You can still continue the story."

        “How can we?” I replied. “We have sort of painted ourselves into a corner with Joseph and Lizamoa moving to New Zealand.” 

        “Not necessarily. There is still a group in India and another group in New Zealand. Why can’t they write to each other.”

        Of course, the idea quickly caught on and we began working out how the series could continue. Our final plan was to form two teams which would begin swapping stories. Susan came up with an opening to this new series in Letter/Story 62 the first story of Volume 5.

       Part of this planning involved coming up with some themes for the next series of stories. We then realised that we had actually started to develop two of these already. The first was the servant girl Katrina and the second was the man from the Game Reserve, Mootie.

       So this story now had two objectives. The first was to move Joseph and Lizamoa to New Zealand and second was to introduce Mootie and his wife as replacements in India. So with these two ideas before me, I set off to write this story. 

         The main part of the story is the conversation which Joseph and Lizamoa had with Mootie and his wife Hansini. It was a bit of a surprise when they discovered Hansini knew about the events that happened at the lake all those years ago. It is obvious Lizamoa was embarrassed by this but then a bit amused when she discovered Hansini thought their adventure was a sexy turn-on.

         Later the subject of nude swimming came up. When Lizamoa asked Hansini directly if she would join in it was once again obvious she was interested. This was not one of your average Indian girls, in fact, it appears she might be quite bold and outgoing.

        The conversation finished with Lizamoa inviting them to the farewell party being held at Sarvesh and Amita’s house. Mootie and Hansini agreed to come. 

        So next week what is going to happen after this big party when most of the important guests from the town had left?

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Letter/Story 62 We Need to Change “Letters”.

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(From Shanti)
        Hi from me to all of you.
        As you will know, The Letters Book originally started as the correspondence between Joseph and me. Over time, more and more people have become involved and even added their own stories as well.
        First, we began to involve our spouses, Lizamoa and Mike, in our letter writing. Later, our friends became involved: Jenny and Peter, then Steve and Sharon from New Zealand. While in India, the couples, Sarvesh and Amita, Jeevan and Mandara, were involved. And I have just come to learn that Mootie and Hansini have now become involved as well. Joseph will tell the story of how this happened in the next story we send to you all.

        When we were in India, we decided to give each couple their own copy of The Letters Book, so as soon as I got back to New Zealand, I started working on this project. But I must confess, I didn’t get very far. Now I have given up work before my baby was born, this project was a good one for me to pick up and complete.
        I found some beautiful black leather binders, which I decided to use. I carefully went back through all the letters, editing them and then making enough copies for everyone. So now you will all have your very own copies of the Letters Series to enjoy for your private fun.
        It was expensive sending these heavy, made-up volumes to India, but I'm sure you will agree it was worth it. Once this current volume is finished, it will be easier to send the empty binders, and then you will fill them yourselves. Now I hope this means we will get to read and write many more stories for the "Naughty Letters Book." Ha! Ha!

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Hello from Susan.

            Notice the heading of this story. It reflects the fact that we were now moving away from a record of a correspondence between two people and more towards a collection of stories swapped between two groups of people. After this volume, you will notice that we dropped the word “letter” altogether and just call them what they have become, stories. In this volume, we also dropped the address at the top of each letter since, by now, we consider that the letters were being swapped via email rather than postal mail.
            So this story is a major turning point in the Letters Project. Our original intention was to finish the story with Joseph and Lizamoa moving to New Zealand. The assumption is that they lived happily ever after. But as we told you in the last few backgrounds of Vol 4, we were enjoying it, and we didn’t want to stop writing.
            The plan we came up with was to begin this new series of stories by creating a few transition stories that act as a turning point for the letters as Joseph moves to New Zealand with his family. The next two letters will also reflect this change before we settle into a new series and new themes. (See what Anne says about this next week.)
            So welcome to a new volume and the new letters, which are now more stories than letters. I hope you continue to follow our blog and enjoy our stories.
            Next week, we have Joseph tell us about the very last few days they were in India when Sarvesh and Amita threw a going-away party for them at the Big House.

            Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        Susan.

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Letter 61 The Taj Mahal.

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From Joseph,            
The Game Reserve,                
Andhra Pradesh,                    
India.                        

            To Shanti,
                Titirangi,
                    Auckland,
                        New Zealand.

Dear Shanti and Mike,
        Hi from India (New Zealand) Ha Ha.
        It is Lizamoa here. It seems I will be writing the very last letter for the letters books before we begin living in New Zealand.
        We had a very good journey coming to New Zealand. Yes, I know Joseph and I have travelled that trip before, but this time we had two extra with us, Jagesh and my mother-in-law, Greeshma.
        But Amita, I will tell you more about our trip in another letter. Tonight I have not got very much time on the computer, and I want to write the story that I promised to do. After telling everyone to leave the story of our visit to the Taj Mahal for me, I became so busy, and with the last week before we left for New Zealand, I didn't do anything. Here I am doing now.

        So as Shanti has told, Sarvesh arranged a small tour taking in the sights of the three cities of Delhi, Jaipur and Agra. The most important sight to see in Agra is the Taj Mahal. The public usually enter by The Great Gate (Darwaza-irauza)—gateway to the Taj Mahal. Once inside, you find yourself within the most lovely gardens. Yes, we enjoyed seeing these and how well they were carefully maintained.
        Then you come upon that lovely view of the Taj Mahal itself. I am sure you remember that beautiful picture view with that long ornamental reflecting pool, which is most famous. We were taking the photos, and it looked like everyone there was also taking many photos. With the sunlight shining off the dome of white marble, it was a very beautiful sight, but very hard to take a good photograph too.
        When we were close to the building, we could see all the stonework of the building, which looked like carving from a distance but was actually inlaid stone work. Mike said it would have taken a long time to do all this work.
        We were able to go inside, and if we thought the outside was beautiful, it was nothing when we compared it with the inside. Again, there was very beautiful craftsmanship and inlaid precious stones.
        Yes, if anyone goes to India, they must not be missing this beautiful building.

        But the lovely work of the building is not the only part of the Taj Mahal. There is also a story behind it too. The story goes that it was constructed by Mughal emperor Shah Jahan as a memorial to his queen Mumtaz Mahal, whom he loved very much. When she died while giving birth, the emperor was grief-stricken.
        It took one year to plan the building and find the craftsmen to do the job. So, one year after her death, with his heart still broken, the emperor oversaw the beginning of the construction of this wonderful project to remember her. It took a large team of workers 22 years to complete (1630-1652 AD).
        Often, there is the story told that once construction was finished, the emperor had all the architects and craftsmen killed by horrific deaths. This was so that another building could not be made like this one. But there has been no evidence found that this actually happened. I can not believe that a man who had so much love for his wife could ever do such a terrible thing.

        Sarvesh had also organised another visit to the Taj Mahal. This time we went at night to view it under the light of the full moon. It seems that they open up just a few nights each side of the full moon. It was beautiful to see this wonderful building bathed in the softer light of the moon as the white dome appeared to glow.
        If you should ever get to visit the Taj Mahal, you should view it under the Full Moon. A most beautiful sight to witness how the white marble dome seems to glow in the moonlight as if it were its own light.

        They were telling us the building is being affected by the pollution of modern man. It is eating into the marble and leaving a covering of dirt, which requires cleaning often. There is a workforce of over 550 doing maintenance, cleaning and gardening tasks as well as guiding the large numbers of tourists every day.
        I was not happy to learn how much damage this building is receiving. It is lucky it was placed in a smaller town and not within a larger city, or the damage would be even worse.

        I have never seen the Taj Mahal before, and so I am so glad that I had a chance to see the wonderful sight, the most wonderful in all of India, before it was time for me to leave India to live in another country far away.

        Now I want to finish this letter with a small poem. I think it is the first time a poem has ever been included in the Letters Book. This poem was written by the Emperor himself when the building was finished, and finally, he gazed upon its beauty.

                        Should guilty seek asylum here,
                                                 Like one pardoned, he becomes free from sin.
                        Should a sinner make his way to this mansion,
                                                 All his past sins are to be washed away.
                        The sight of this mansion creates sorrowing sighs;
                                                 And the sun and the moon shed tears from their eyes.
                        In this world this edifice has been made;
                                                 To display thereby the creator's glory.

        Well, that is all I have to tell you in this story.
                Bye with lots of love.
                        From,
                                Lizamoa.

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Hello from Shandra

            I had the loveliest story to write. I wanted it to be romantic and full of love rather than sexy, as most of our stories are. The Taj Mahal is a monument of love, so it worked very well for my story.

            The story behind the building of the Taj Mahal is the story of an Emperor whose wife died during childbirth. In his grief for her, he decides to build this monument to her memory. It is a labour of love, the love he has for her.
            We had always thought about including a visit to the Taj Mahal in our stories of the Indian adventures, but when I wanted to include it in a special story, we thought it would be a great way to end the Letters Series.
            I discovered a poem which was supposed to have been written by the Emperor himself, so I decided to include this as well. I think this is the first poem to be included in the Letters Series, which makes this story a tiny bit special, too.

            We heard that the complex is open during the full moon when the white marble of the dome appears to glow in the moonlight. So I added a second evening visit for the group to again visit, this time to view The Taj Mahal under the light of the full moon.
            What a beautiful way to end the Letters Story.

            But then the Letters Series didn’t end. It will continue with the first letter/story of Vol Five beginning next week.

Extra:-
            In June 2013, I did actually get to visit the Taj Mahal. It was a surprise for me that my husband had arranged. It was his labour of love for me, I think, organising this without my knowing. I wasn’t disappointed; it was as good as I wrote in my story. I was amazed at the beauty of this building, and the whole time it was in my mind that this was a labour of love, by the emperor, in memory of his beloved wife.

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Letter 60 End of our India Trip.

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From Shanti,            
Titirangi,            
Auckland,            
New Zealand.            

            To Joseph,
            The Game Reserve,
            Andhra Pradesh,
            India.

Hello to you, Joseph, Lizamoa and Ragesh.
        Now things are moving so very fast. I know you will be on your way to New Zealand soon, now that things are sorted in Wellington. It will be good to have you here with us.
        Don’t worry about staying with us. We want you to stay with us. I understand that it's challenging to find a house and settle in a new country, so we invite you to stay with us until you have everything sorted out.
        Also, don’t worry about your mother. We will make her feel welcome, too. I am sure once she settles in, she will like New Zealand very much. I talked with my mother about her, and she will be happy to show her around and help as well, so your mum will have a friend more her own age.

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Hello from Allan.

            The final part of the journey through India covers a lot of places and a lot of attractions. When I first wrote this, I just included the names of some of the places. I was more interested in completing the story rather than building in lots of detail. Later, we decided that more detail might make it seem that the story had been written by someone who had actually been there, so I reworked the story, adding more attractions and more detail on many of the places mentioned.
            More recently, we had a friend over for dinner who had been travelling through this area, and of course, Shandra had been there as well, so I have been able to include some ideas I got from them. Some of the places were dropped as it was too much to get done in such a short trip. So we added more detail to the places we kept.
            Note that this story underwent another major rewrite in the first few days of 2026.

            When I started writing, there was nothing to base this story on except that they were in Ooty and they had to meet their flight in New Delhi, with a visit to the Taj Mahal to be included along the way. Since I was left with such an open brief, pretty much everything I wrote had to be invented as I went along. One guideline I did have was that the final arrangements for the trip were made by Sarvesh.
            Sarvesh was a wealthy businessman who had travelled a lot, both throughout India and overseas. The idea of him organising the touring was that he would come up with something completely different to your normal organised package tour. This is why we choose places like the Periyar Tiger Reserve, the Kerala Backwaters and Ooty. I also found some interesting attractions I would love to visit, such as the Jantar Mantar, a collection of fourteen major architectural astronomical instruments set up as an observatory. That would be an amazing place to see.
            The story ends when the group splits up in Delhi, with the Indian group returning to South India and the New Zealand group flying out to Singapore.

            We did manage to add in a little bit of sexy adventure with another partner-swapping night. We were intending to build this into another story or even a set of stories, but this never happened. Later, when we came up with the idea of the whole group meeting again at an adult resort, we came back and added in the final lunch together, where Sarvesh made a toast and proposal to arrange another holiday together.

            Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        Allan and Anne.

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Letter 59 Otty – The Hill Station.

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From Joseph,            
The Game Reserve,                
Andhra Pradesh,                    
India.                        

            To Shanti,
                Titirangi,
                    Auckland,
                        New Zealand.

Dear Shanti and Mike,
        Hi to my New Zealand friends. Here in India and we are very well, and things are progressing well too. We hope all are well and happy within the New Zealand also.
        Thank you again for your good story writing, Shanti. It is good to remember all the things we were getting up to while you were over here.
        Now, the problem of the loose bikini top on the water slide. This is a big problem! It appears bikini tops are unable to stay on you, Shanti. Now the question to be asked is: Did this clothing item just come loose by itself, or did you give some help? I did not witness this event, and so it is hard for me to be the judge. Mike is sure it was on purpose, but Lizamoa believes at first the bikini coming off was accidental, and then the reveal afterwards was more intentional for the lifesaver. Is this second theory the correct one? I believe, knowing you, Shanti, maybe that is the correct theory.

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Hi from Susan.

            The stay in the hill station of Ooty was a great place to have another sexual adventure. My instruction from the meeting was to come up with a very sexy story that would happen in this mountain location. It was only later, when Allan was researching for his story, that we discovered that Ooty was more than just a tourist resort, which gave us the chance to add a bit more about the place. Maybe we might be able to convince a few of you guys that we had actually been there. Yeah right!
            One interesting fact about Ooty, which was useful to my story, is that it is set high up in the mountains, so of course, it is much cooler than down in the lowlands. I remember that once a group of us stayed in one of the hill stations in Malaysia called Maxwell Hill. We were enjoying the refreshing coolness after the heat of Malaysia, while Shandra’s Malaysian family, who were with us, were freezing their butts off.
            On Maxwell Hill, they had some cottages which once were used by the British but which were now used as holiday stays. Now it is actually quite popular with the local people. We had two of them close together, so I decided to do much the same thing for my Ooty story as well.
            I had an interesting situation. A group of people in a warm house, spending the evening together in front of a hot fire. Throw in some bottles of wine and some sexy stories to read. Suddenly, there were some very interesting sexual possibilities.
            My goal was to take this group situation into a group sex party, probably what you could call an orgy. The general idea was to get people naked and doing something a bit sexy and see where things went. This was achieved by heating up the room to where people began feeling like getting their clothes off. Then came the idea of a massage, which, since Mandara, who already knew what it felt like to be under Mike’s hands, was keen for it again. The informal pairing off soon led to things getting sexier, and then finally Jenny and Sarvesh took it to full sexual intercourse. As Steve in the story would say, "Soon it was wall to wall nooky."
            Oh, and just in case you are wondering I didn’t have an orgy with Shandra’s family up on Maxwell Hill. Pity, though, I might have been interested in a couple of her cousins. They were hot-looking guys! LOL. And I know they were checking me out wearing that tiny bikini at the waterfall.
            (Probably had big cocks too!)

            Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        Susan.

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Letter 58 Tigers to Tiny Trains.

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From Shanti,            
Titirangi,            
Auckland,            
New Zealand.            

            To Joseph,
            The Game Reserve,
            Andhra Pradesh,
            India.

Hello to you, Joseph, Lizamoa and Ragesh.
        It is good to hear that you are now in the final stages of having your visa granted. Soon you will be making the final arrangements for your move to New Zealand, so I think this will be one of the last letters in our series of letters before you arrive here. It will be good to have you both here, but I think I am going to miss the letters too.
        Here in New Zealand, we are all doing fine. The baby keeps me occupied a lot of the time, and with the work I am doing, too, I am busy most days. That is good because I was worried that being at home all day, I would have nothing to do and get bored.
        Mike is also very busy with Peter, as they have opened another car yard and they are now importing used cars from Japan. The good side of this new business is now we always have nice cars to drive.

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Hello from Anne.

            The stories about touring around India were a bit of a problem. We wanted to tell about some of the places they visited, but we were also concerned that it would not be very sexy to just focus on travelling around. So we got together to look at how we could get some more sex into the stories.
            I took the first story covering the journey from Madurai to Ooty. Yes, I know this was covered a bit in Letter 57, but I wanted to add more detail to make it appear that this trip actually did take place. Having never been to India, we used the Internet to discover what attractions were available and work out a possible route as well.

            I covered the Perijar Tiger Reserve, and Susan added that bit about the tiger giving birth. We had heard there was a tiger breeding program, but we could not confirm it. We also had no idea what a tiger breeding program would be like, so actually, I based the story on the kiwi breeding program in Rotorua in New Zealand.
            Kiwis! They are like tigers, aren't they? LOL.

            Of course, all stories need a sexy bit too, so I added that little bit of fun where Shanti loses her bikini top on the water slide. I know that has been done a few times in other stories, so I put in the bit where she openly shows off her tits to the lifeguard while replacing her top. We can always do with a little bit of unintentional exhibitionism, can't we?
            This was based on something which happened to me in New Zealand when I was using the water slide at the hot pools north of Auckland at Waiwera. I decided to try the best, or you might say the worst, slide called The Black Hole. It is dark inside, and it is fast! There is a place right at the end where the water tips you over just before you emerge from the tube.
            I was wearing a new bikini which had a clip at the back and a tie behind my neck. As I began sliding, I suddenly realised the clip had come undone. I reached around behind me to try and fasten it again and lost my balance. I fell flat on my back, which of course caused me to pick up speed. Here I was racing down this completely dark tube with my bikini top hanging uselessly around my neck. I was holding on to it until I reached that place at the end. My extra speed caused me to flip right over onto my back again, and that is how I shot out of the tube, still rolling as I plunged into the water. My bikini top had slipped out of my hand and was swept off, over my head. I hit the water on my back and skidded across the pool like that with my tits openly on display.
            As I regained my balance, I stood up in the waist-deep water with my hands over my breasts. I was looking around for my bikini top but couldn’t see it. The guy on lifeguard duty spotted it and fished it out using a long stick. He handed it to me as I left the pool. It was then that, like in the story, I decided to give him that little reveal as I replaced my top.
            Yes, I did get a hard time from my partner Allan, who had come down the slide behind me. He never believed me when I told him it was an accident. He still doesn’t. Anyway, I think my nice little titty flash made the lifeguards' day, too. Ha! Ha!

            Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        Anne.

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Letter 57 Extra Story Six

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Story Five - Steve and Lizamoa.

        This is the sixth of the six stories after the domino game. Since these stories do not actually fit in with any of our letters, we have left them as separate stories in the book without letter headings, but since Joseph wrote about playing the game, we consider them to be under the general heading of his letter and called the Letter 57 extras.

Mike: -
        After Mandara informed us that she was unable to participate in any sexy fun and games, it left a problem for me with an odd number of people. Since this would not have worked out properly, I volunteered to remain out of the game as well. This meant that Mandara and I were left to organise the game and then afterwards make sure that nobody ended up with their own partners. It wouldn’t be any fun to participate in a partner-swapping game and then end up spending the night with your own spouse.
        So we laid out the game and, between the two of us, kept score so nobody else knew who was winning or losing. Once the game was over, we had a list of the guys that we matched with the list of names the girls had drawn out. This meant that even if someone had worked out which guy had won the dominoes, they still didn’t know the order in which the girls were chosen.
        We went to another table and sat down to match up the two lists, and surprisingly, we didn’t need to make many changes. I was certain that we would need to change at least a couple of names, but they all worked out pretty well. Anyway, whether we made changes or not, we are not telling anyone. We then returned to the rest of the group to announce the results. After that, we had one last drink before we all retired to our rooms.
        Since Shanti had a guest in our room, it meant, of course, I had to share a room and a bed with Mandara for the night, even though I knew there would be no sex coming in my direction that night.
        'Oh well,' I thought. 'It couldn't be helped.'
        Some of them did ask me to join them for a threesome, but I knew it would be pushing into their fun, so each time I politely declined.

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Hi, I am Allan.
            I got to write the last story in this dominoes series. I found this story a bit of a challenge because the girls had already written that Mandara was having her monthly period and, therefore, was unable to have sex. My problem was - how could you have a sexy story without any sex?

            It was at that point that the girls arranged for me to spend one Friday night with Shandra. I enjoy being with her as she is a good bed partner. Not as aggressive as either Anne or Susan, but more passive, willing to allow her partner to lead. It was a good night. The following morning, we played a little fantasy game where we invented a story while we brought ourselves off.
            The story was based on an early one that Anne and I wrote for Letters about having sex while someone was watching us. Of course, in this case, it was Shandra and me in the story. I still remember how, as we were reaching the climax in the story, I felt the body of the girl leaning back against me give a shudder. She gave a little moan followed by a gasp as her body stiffened. As she relaxed again, she was breathing heavily. She told me it had been so good, so intense.
            I suddenly decided this was what I needed for my story. We talked about it for a while, and Shandra decided she would use a similar idea in her story as well. My idea was for Mandara to arrange this for Mike since he had been willing to volunteer not to have any sex that night. The story that they came up with was about Mandara going swimming in a see-through when wet bikini. This story appears to have worked well with Mike, too.
            Notice how the bikini changes colour halfway through the story. I added that in on purpose to make it seem that Mandara got so involved in telling the story that she forgot the detail of the bikini colour. Of course, light blue works better with it becoming see-through.
            I completed the story like this, and then recently, when we were writing the background stories, just a few weeks before publishing, I read the story out to the writers group. Ayaka was listening to the story.
            Suddenly, she said, “Why can’t Mandara have an orgasm over the story too?”
            “I asked her how this would happen.”
            She replied, “Well, first Mike has his big cum to the story, but he is unaware that she has also been rubbing her pussy through her panties. She continues the story and, to his surprise, has an orgasm too.”
            It sounded like it might work, so I told her to have a go at it. This extra bit was then added to my story by Ayaka.

            To complete the story, I added the scene around the pool the following morning. Of course, since Mike and Mandara had a story to tell, they started writing along with the other couples. I put in that fun bit where Shanti comes over to find out what they were writing, but of course, Mike wasn’t giving anything away, just to tease her.
            I was reading this bit out to the girls soon after I had finished the story when Susan interrupted me. “What if Mike and Mandara did actually have sex?”
            “But she can’t, she is having her monthly.”
            “Why would that stop them?”
            “But what about the mess in the hotel room?”
            “They could do it in the bathroom and just clean up afterwards.”
            The idea was thrown backwards and forwards between the girls. I said nothing at first. Susan was in favour of it, and Shandra was very strongly against it. It appeared Anne was undecided.
            Finally, Susan challenged them with, “Well, you and I have tried it, Anne, so why can’t Mandara try it too?”
            That sort of finished the discussion. I was given the job of trying to add it in and see how it went. “Not too much detail,” Anne told me. “Just enough to let us know that they did it.”
            So that is how I wrote it. So this story a sexy turn-on or totally gross? We have had both reactions from people who have seen it.

            Next week, we continue the tour around Southern India. Not so sexy since they are mainly travelling, but Shanti does manage to lose her bikini top on a water slide.

            Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        Allan Jr.

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Letter 57 Extra Story Five

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Story Five - Steve and Lizamoa.

        This is the fifth of the six stories after the dominoes game. Since these stories do not actually fit in with any of our letters, we have left them as separate stories in the book without letter headings. However, since Joseph wrote about playing the game, we consider them to be under the general heading of his letter and have called the Letter 57 extras.

Hi, from Lizamoa:-
        At the end of the dominoes game, when they were announcing the partners, Jeevan and Shanti were paired together, and even before they said anything more, I knew the last man, Steve, was my partner. Before Mike had even called out my name, I was walking towards the last empty seat beside Steve.
        Over my shoulder, as I sat down, I heard Mike say, “And the last couple is Lizamoa and Steve,” because we all knew who it was anyway.

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Hi, Shandra again.
            Since Lizamoa is very similar in personality to me, I ended up writing this story as well.

            First off, there is that great little scene where Jenny finds out what Shanti and Lizamoa told the barman. I thought this was a fun way of opening my story.
            Now we get to the actual story. There is the bathroom scene first. I was looking for something different when I thought about them having a bath rather than the usual shower. I knew that some of the others were using the shower in their stories, so I wanted to make my story stand out from them. Of course, Lizamoa still had to get in completely dressed in her sari. It would not be a good Lizamoa sex scene unless she got her clothes soaking wet.
            My next problem was how to get her naked once she had got her clothes wet. It is a bit hard to do a strip while sitting in a bath. Try it sometime, and you will see what I mean. So she had to stand up to take her clothes off. She did her strip almost standing over him, and from where he was, it must have been a great view up at her.
            When she gets down to just her bra and panties, she begins playing with herself. When the bra is gone, her fingers slip down inside her panties to her pussy, and she really starts to give it some treatment. Then her panties are gone, and she begins to play with her nipples and pussy. When I was at this point, Anne saw my story. Why don’t you make Liz go too far with her show and accidentally cum? I thought that was a great idea, and so that is what happened.
            We actually get two versions of this, which adds to the idea of two people writing this story.

            The sex which followed was good, and I tried to write something different here as well. However, it turned out, it works well, and I am happy with it.
            The next morning, they get into some role-playing fun when Steve is telling Lizamoa that she is too bossy in bed and that he is the one in charge. This quickly develops into Lizamoa pretending to be submissive, and Steve begins calling the shots.
            More recently, just before this story was published, Kim and Ayaka had a go at this scene. They developed the conversation so she begins her little girl act, calling him ‘daddy.’ I rather liked this because it fits with another couple of times when the girls wrote about her doing this. Good work, girls!

            Next week, we come to the final story in this domino series. What did Mike and Mandara do that night? You might remember that she is unable to have sex, so what does she give him? Maybe a great hand-job or even a hot blow-job? Sorry, you guys have a week to wait. Ha Ha.

            Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        Shandra.

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Letter 57 Extra Story Four

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Story Four - Jeevan and Shanti.

        This is the fourth of the six stories following the domino game. Since these stories do not actually fit in with any of our letters, we have left them as separate stories in the book without letter headings, but since Joseph wrote about playing the game, we consider them to be under the general heading of his letter and called the Letter 57 extras.

Shanti:-
        There was general agreement all around about the selections that had been made. The only thing was, I felt a bit sorry for Mike, as after putting all that work into arranging this evening, he was not going to take part. I almost decided to ask Jeevan if he could join in with us, but then I knew Jeevan was happy to be spending the night with me alone, and I didn’t want to spoil it in any way for him.

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Hi, from Anne again.
            This is the second story of the dominoes series, which I got to write; I think the girls gave me this one because of the difference in personalities between Shanti and Jeevan. They are almost complete opposites. Jeevan was shy and nervous, while Shanti was so bold and outgoing, so I knew it was going to be an interesting challenge.
            At first, I was unsure how to tell this story. Finally, I called in the other three for a brainstorming session. I didn’t exactly follow their advice, but it did kind of kick-start my brain. In the end, the story sort of went well, and I was happy with it too.

Now to the story.
            Things weren’t getting off to a good start, and finally, Jeevan admitted how nervous he was. With some quick thinking, Shanti came up with a way of breaking the ice. She suggested that they have a shower together first. At least that would get them both naked. I think at this point, Shanti might have been wondering what she had got herself into.
            Then I switched the story to Jeevan, and I let him give us a detailed account of how he begins washing Shanti, his hands rubbing soap all over her naked body. Notice he tells us she closed her eyes twice, at two different times. We think, with little mistakes' like this, the story seems more real, like it was written by someone 'unskilled in writing in English. So they ended up undressed and naked together in the shower. A good way to start. He is rubbing and touching all over the front of her nude body. This, of course, turns very sexy when he reaches her pussy. It ended with what she called a ‘mind-blowing orgasm.’ Thanks, Susan, for suggesting I take this first scene as far as that. ‘Mind-blowing orgasm,’ I like that. I must remember to use it again. Do you like ‘mind-blowing orgasms’? I know I do, LOL.
            This then got me thinking. After what had just happened in the shower, it was obvious that Jeevan knew a thing or two about how to turn a girl on. What if it turned out that he was a great lover in bed, too? That would be a total surprise for Shanti as well as a surprise for you, readers and the other writers. So that was how I completed the story. He controls the sex, reading her body as he builds them both towards their climax. She is experiencing excitement and frustration, both at the same time. She has never had a lover like this before. She has never had a lover who takes so much control. It is like him being totally in control of when she will orgasm. It is a hot scene and works well for both of them, too.

            Just for a bit of fun at the end, I added that scene the next morning by the pool, where Shanti goes over to try and find out what Mike and Mandara are writing about. Shanti always wants to know what is going on, and this time Mike wasn’t telling her. When she returns in frustration, we can see Jeevan is kind of amused by this, too.

            Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        Anne.

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Letter 57 Extra Story Three

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Story Three - Joseph and Jenny

        This is the third of the six partner swapping stories after the dominoes game. Since these stories do not actually fit in with any of our letters, we have left them as separate stories in the book without letter headings, but since Joseph wrote about playing the game, we consider them to be under the general heading of his letter and called the Letter 57 extras.

Hi, it is Joseph writing, and Jenny is helping me.
        The dominoes game had been closely fought by us guys and but now as I look back, it was a surprise we became so competitive. Anyway, after we had finished, Mandara and Mike were announcing the results.
        The third girl for Mike to be called was Jenny. I have always liked Jenny. I think she is a very sexy woman. I like talking to her too. I think she likes me too, even if she can be very cheeky to me. I looked over at her, and she was looking at me too. She gave her lips the little lick with the tongue. Yes, I am knowing she is wanting with me.
        Then Mandara said my name, and we all knew who my love-partner was going to be.
        Jenny came over and sat beside me. She snuggled against me, and I put my arm around her. Yes, I was right, she was happy with the choice, like I was.

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Hi, Shandra, now.
            This story is different in that I only used one person to write the whole letter. Yes, I know the plan was for both people to share the writing, but I wanted something different to the other stories. Joseph does say he wrote the letter while Jenny assisted him. I know this was not Anne's plan, but she seems to have accepted it since this story is still here.

            I covered a conversation between Joseph and Lizamoa before Joseph went off to Jenny’s room. I wanted them to feel sorry that their friend Mike was missing out. I also wanted Lizamoa to consider asking Steve if he would like to share with Mike. Following that, out in the passageway, Joseph did offer to share Jenny, but Mike said he would be OK. Anne mentioned this in her Story 1, too. My intention here is to help build towards what Allan is writing about in Story 6 between Mike and Mandara. Get you guys thinking about what is going to happen with Mike. He's one of the heroes, we wouldn't let him miss out or would we?
            At first, Jenny admits that she is a bit nervous and unsure where to start. She says, except for once with Steve, she has not had sex with anyone else since she married Peter. Well, that is not actually true because I’m sure you readers will remember that hot sex session she had with Joseph and Sharon at the Ripper Stripper Party. Maybe threesomes don’t count! Well, Joseph reminded her about that.
            To break the ice, Joseph suggests they have a shower together first, and then they can watch TV. That surprises her, but it sure gets her attention. It also gave me the chance to write in the little funny bit where they fight over the TV remote, too. This had the effect of getting them on the bed together with their bodies close, and then nature just took over.

            The sex was good, but what I really wanted to talk about was what happened the following morning. During an interesting conversation, they were telling each other about doing a joint strip dance at a Ripper Stripper Party. While they were talking, they were using their hand to bring themselves off to a climax.
            This part of the story was based on a real event I got involved in with Allan. One Friday evening, us three girls were driving up to Allan’s farm for the weekend. We were talking about the stories we were writing about spending a night with a man. I happened to mention that I would love to spend a whole night with a man again since I had only ever done it once.
            “Well, why not do it tonight?” Anne asked.
            “What about you, Anne?”
            “Well, I can’t this weekend. It’s my monthly.”
            We asked Allan, and he seemed OK with it, so it was arranged for me to spend Friday night with Allan and Susan have him for Saturday night.
            I was still not sure that I should, since Allan was my step-brother, but I had done it once with him, so eventually, they convinced me to do it again.
            We had some good sex that evening and then got up for a shower. Soon we were back in bed for some more sex. Why get up for a shower in between? Don’t ask. I have no idea why we did that. Anyway, by the time we had finished, we didn’t get to sleep until it was very late. The next morning, we were awake but still in bed. He had his arm around me, and I was lying back against him.
            He told me about making ourselves cum while making up a fantasy story. This sounded like something a bit different, and so I agreed to give it a go. The story we came up with was about having sex at a beach while someone was watching us. It was a good story, sexy too, and it had the right result for both of us.
            Talking to him afterwards, we both decided to use the idea in our stories. I chose to use a scene from a Ripper Stripper Party, which I thought was hot. Allan decided that Mandara should wear a daring bikini, which became see-through when wet. (See story six)
            Opps! I've given that away, haven't I? Nothing is supposed to happen between Mike and Mandara in Story Six. Hope you all closed your eyes when you read that bit. Ha! Ha!

            Yes, I am happy with this story. I think it works well. I am particularly happy with the fantasy story. It is almost entirely done using conversation, which is kind of neat.

            Next week, Anne is going to tell us about what Shanti and Jeevan did together. This is going to be interesting since these two characters are almost complete opposites in their personalities.

            Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        Shandra.

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