Posted by Anne.
This story is among the oldest in this volume. It was actually written a long time before we began working on the resort section, going right back to mid-2003 as far as we can tell. I know this story was written before Susan and I competed in that first wet-T shirt contest in Tauranga after our nude camping holiday Jan 2004. I think the story might even have played a part in my entering that real contest back then.
On reading my diary, I found that fitting this story in was one reason we came up with the idea of the Resort in the first place. We wanted a location where a show like this could take place so decided on a holiday to an adult resort. Everything else just developed from there.
We have tried doing some work on improving it but you will notice that the writing is still not up to the standard of other stories in this section. Anyway, it's still a good exhibitionism story so as far as we are concerned it stays in.
We have tried doing some work on improving it but you will notice that the writing is still not up to the standard of other stories in this section. Anyway, it's still a good exhibitionism story so as far as we are concerned it stays in.
My diary talks about another smaller version of this story where the whole contest ran over one night. I do not believe we still have any copies of this earlier version. It would be interesting to see it again and compare it to this one.
The last part of this story, the conversation between Lizamoa and Katrina was added by Shandra only a few weeks ago. It was our intention to have Katrina babysitting on that final night but then Shandra decided to include her in the audience. Give her some more exposure to exhibitionism. LOL
There is not much more I can tell you about it.
Something else happened on the second night that led to the next adventure the group will get themselves into, the nude chess game, but I’m going to leave that until next week before we tell you what happened.
Now in Shanti's opening comments, she mentions Jenny losing her baby and becoming very sick. This is actually a build-up to an old story line where Jenny dies in New Zealand and Brian dies in India. (Susan broke up with the real Brian and wanted the name out of our stories) The idea was for Mega to move to New Zealand and live with Peter.
But this idea was voted out by our younger writers and so began a major write through this section. While Jenny gets sick she is not written out of the stories. Later both Mega and Brian will move to New Zealand but this is getting ahead of ourselves now.
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