Story 103 Part A The Trial of Amita and Hansini.

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Part A   The Trial.

Hi, it is Shanti here.

            This story was always going to be one of the more challenging stories that we have ever written for the Letters Book, it was decided that I should attempt writing it. Since most of the story is a conversation, I have tried to take extra care in getting it reading correctly. Mike and Joseph had a lot of input too and I sent the completed story to India where Amita and Hansini have worked on it too. Here is the final result.

            Thank you, everyone, for your help both in making this story in the first place and also in helping write it.

            So enough of all this admin stuff, let’s get on with the story. 

            Later in the morning after what happened to Steve, involving Amita and Hansini, (I strongly suggest that you go back and read Story 100 Setting Steve Up and Story 101 The Worlds Greatest Lover, then the ending of Story 102 Katrina's Story Part Five) I was sitting under the shade beside the pool. I noticed Mike, Joseph and Sarvesh were sitting at a table not far from me. They were joined by Mootie and Jeevan for a while. Lizamoa and Mandara were also there for a while too.

            There was a lot of laughing and I noticed Mike was writing something from time to time. It was obvious those three were up to something and I was tempted to go over and find out but then it was such a beautiful morning. I was content to sit back in my deck chair looking out over the beach and the ocean, while a gentle breeze refreshed me.

            Many of you make comments about Shanti minding everybody’s business, this time Shanti decided she would just mind her own business.

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                                                                Posted by Allan, Anne & Susan.

         The trial scene is the next part of this larger story about the two girls, Amita and Hansini, deciding to get back at Steve.

         As we saw two weeks ago, things went wrong and got totally out of control. In the end, the men, led by Mike had to mount a rescue to save Steve. This gets the men thinking, Mike and Sarvesh decide that the two girls needed to be ‘punished’ for going too far. They decide upon a mock trial, which is the major theme of this week’s story. 

         This was always going to be a hard story to write. It is almost completely conversation from the trial. I strongly suggest that you go back and read Story 100 Setting Steve Up and Story 101 The Worlds Greatest Lover, then the ending of Story 102 Katrina's Story Part Five. Events from those stories will be mentioned throughout this story so by reading the original versions you will be able to tell who is telling the truth and who is a false witness, ‘lying’ in court.

          We worked over these conversations many times but I still feel there could be more done if we had the time. Anyway, publishing is on top us this week so I have to let it go as it is now.

         The main ideas that we wanted to capture here are that this was hopeless for the girls. No matter what they say or do, there is no way they were going to be allowed to win their case. They realised this from the beginning but we wanted to capture how Hansini changed from a fun mood to frustration, until finally she was resigned to her fate. I also wanted to catch the way different witnesses were for or against the girls and modified their testimonies accordingly.

          Considering the way they were being set-up Hansini put up a brave fight. Shandra says in her letter that at one point she thought the girls might actually win their case. We all know Mike and Sarvesh would never have allowed that to happen, they had the outcome determined before they started.

          So enjoy this story. It is something a bit different. Hope you like it.

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Story 102 Katrina’s Story (Part Five)

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Hi, it is Katrina here again.

        Here we are beginning the last part of my story but before I do, I must reply to some comments made about my story. 

First to Peter.

            Peter, I am very sorry but I did say the right person name when I called Mike. But, I do not think you should be complaining because you were able to be having your turn in New Zealand later I am remembering.

Now to Steve

            Yes, our story is taking the time to make and to write but don’t you think the best part of a good story is waiting for the exciting ending?  

            Well said, Katrina.

                        (Mike.) 

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                                                                Posted by Shandra & Allan.

Hi from Shandra,

           Here it is! The big moment when Katrina finally loses her virginity. It is a big moment, a big event for her. That is why we have taken so long getting there. I hope you find this sex scene was worth the wait. I won’t go into details here as you will read them in the story but this scene was partly based on my first time with Allan. That is why he got pulled into writing this story.

           Once Katrina has lost her virginity, it will be wide open for her to take partners with others in the group that move on to New Zealand. A glance down the second index page will reveal that she appears in many of the New Zealand stories. Actually, she quickly becomes quite skilled with sex, probably having so many sex partners helped too. 

           Over the next two volumes, you will find she plays a major role in the stories. Once I had finished this story, other writers started to use her in their stories too. I think she replaced Lizamoa as the darling of the writer's team for a while.

           The sex scene in this story was not the best we have written but then with Katrina still a virgin there was not a lot more we could do with it anyway. What I like are the conversations that went with it. I tried to capture those special moments surrounding a girl’s first time.

           When we began writing the stories between Katrina and David I also wanted to add a bit here too where she talks to Mike about him. I think it was rather interesting how she was lying with a man she just had sex with while she was telling him about her feelings for another man. 

           Finally, Allan and I took the chance to build on that scene where Steve is found tired to the bed with almost every girl there, taking turns to have him. It helped in taking Mike from lying in bed with Katrina to getting involved in saving his friend.

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Story 101 The World’s Greatest Lover.

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          Hi, it is Hansini and Amita, we are going to write this story together and I believe it will be turning into a long one. We wish to tell you more about the story Lizamoa began in her last letter.   

            We were listening to Steve making such statements about Lizamoa’s story of her lovemaking session with Peter and Mike. It was beginning to get Amita and also to me as well. When we challenged him, he began making the bold remarks about how he would be so good in the bed. And so we decided to call his challenge and we asked him to prove it for the night.

            There he was in front of everyone. He either had to prove up or shut-up. Even his friend Peter, warned him he was heading for trouble. However, Steve, not wanting to be seen backing down, he agreed to spend the night with us. Amita and I were talking later and making the plan to really give him for that night. We decided we were really going to give him a hard time that night.

            First, we demanded we get from him what Mike was giving to Katrina. We wanted an afternoon of fun swimming, a beach walk followed by a romantic dinner watching the sunset. To our surprise, he agreed to all this.

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                                                                Posted by Allan, Anne & Susan.

Hi Anne here.

         Now we come to the main event where Amita and Hansini go off with Steve. It is obvious Steve is very pleased with himself for landing a threesome with these two hot girls. What he doesn’t know is that this three-some with two Indian girls comes with a lot of Indian spice too.

         We knew from the start this part had to be fun. Those girls were clearly out to get him so we needed to make everything go wrong for him.

        I still remember the night we first sat down to work it out. It was so funny and we came up with more and more ideas. Soon we had so many the problem was deciding which ones we would use. Don’t worry most of the ideas we rejected have been reworked into other stories.

        With a list to guide us, the actual writing went fairly well. Soon we had completed a half-decent story. Since this was a long way ahead it was left for a while then picked up again as we came to adding it into the printed version of letters. It was at this point that the decision was made to split it into three separate stories.

         Then when we came to publish it there was another major re-work that didn’t change the basic story but made dozens of small improvements. Finally, we get to publish it here.

         Next week we will get the final part of Shandra’s story about Katrina. Yes, it finally happens. I know some of you guys have been waiting so long for this. Then the following week we will see how the men decide they need to help their mate Steve by getting Amita and Hansini back.

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Story 100 Extra Susan and Anne’s Mum Face-Off.

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Hi everyone - Anne here.
          This is a real story, not made up. Many of you have heard of the story about Susan and my mother. My father has agreed to write the full account of what happened. I know Susan is popular on this blog and many of you are friends with her, even ex-boyfriends, three of you. For that reason, we know you will be interested in this special story.
         This is not a sexy story, so don't expect that. My father even said it was a bit scary. I can understand why he might feel like that. It shows a darker side of Susan, a product of her hard life as she was growing up. I know many of you have seen hints of this other side of Susan, the hard, moody, tough side. So enough from me, let's get on with the story.

Susan here now,
       I have read everything that has been written here and fully agree to it being published.
               Love you all.

Story 100 Setting Steve Up.

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Hi from New Zealand. Hi from Lizamoa here.

           Shanti and I have the next story for me to tell about our stay at the resort on the Great Barrier Reef.

           Thank you for that great letter on the nude cruise Amita and Joseph. Oh, also I must add to Sarvesh as well. I promise I did not read that Amita is older than you. I am also sure that everyone else shut their eyes when reading that part too. Ha! Ha!

            Now I must comment further on your story Katrina. While you were in New Zealand, I knew you and Mike were working on it together. Mike also told me that you have been working together over the internet and Hansini is involved too. Until now I have not seen much about it so now I am enjoying it. Mike tells me you have only one more part to go. Wow! Anyway, it has been a great story. I would like to see it all together one day.

            Now two of our team have some comments to add.

            Peter: - Katrina I believe when you selected Mike at the resort that you accidentally said his name by mistake when I know that in fact you really meant to say my name.

            Steve: - This is a good story Katrina. Sharon and I are enjoying it. I only have one small complaint. It is taking you so long to get to the best part. You know the ‘nooky’ part. Please hurry up!

            Mike: Don’t listen to them, Katrina. These guys are just jealous, aren’t they? You did choose the right person, I’m sure you already know that. You have done a great job of your parts of the story. I am impressed with your writing. Keep up the good work girl!

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                                                                Posted by Allan, Anne & Susan.

  
       This story was once the opening to a much larger story designed as the climax to the Resort Stories (Vol Seven). Over time, as the story grew in size, it became apparent that it would need to be split into a number of sections. The final Online version has divided the story into four parts, which will be published over the next five weeks. 

Three Authors?

         Three authors? What a deadly combination that is! 

         I (Allan) started writing parts of the second section, now called “The Worlds Greatest Lover,” meanwhile Anne was working on this opening “Setting Steve Up” and Susan started on a smaller version of the trial scene. Since these stories were so closely related we were soon in each other’s stories so now it’s very hard to remember which of us wrote each piece. Of course, our rework process added to the confusion as the new writers have had their impact on the stories as well. So maybe I should just say All Of Us wrote it. 

The Main Theme.

          The two girls, Amita and Hansini, were becoming tired of Steve always teasing them and bragging about how good he was. One day they were listening to him teasing Lizamoa and decided something had to be done about it. So they arranged for him to be with them for an afternoon and evening. Originally their intention was to give him a hard-time for a while before settling down to some fun but things got out of hand in the morning when other girls got involved.

         The men decided it might be fun to get back at Amita and Hansini, so they organize a mock court where the girls are put on trial. Of course from the start, it is obvious that the whole thing is a set-up and the girls have no chance of winning their case.

         Finally, they all meet in the evening to witness the punishment being delivered. Again what was intended and what actually happens were two different things. 

The Opening.

         So this week we have the opening scene, set beside the pool, where Amita and Hansini set Steve up and tricked him into spending a night with them. It is obvious Steve thinks he was on to a good thing. His friends can see the girls have other motives in mind. They try to warn him, but Steve pushes on blindly, ignoring their warnings.

         Next week we will get to see how that night goes and what they do to poor Steve. Yes, I did say ‘poor Steve’ because in some ways I do feel sorry for him. They give him a rough time.

         We hope you have fun reading these stories. We certainly did writing them.

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Story 99 Part B Swapping Husbands.

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Part B  The Plan is Carried Out.

Mega now:-

        At dinner, I sat opposite Peter. As we ate, I was watching him. He was wearing a tight T-shirt which clung to his body. I was thinking to myself he was a handsome man. He looked good and I was thinking of being with him, making sex with him.

        He had lighter coloured hair, not light like his wife who sat beside him but brown, a darker brown. I liked his face, a happy face with those deep blue eyes that twinkled when he smiled. I thought it was a bit of the sky captured in them.

       Peter enjoys life and that night he was in a really good mood, laughing and joking with Joseph and Sarvesh. I don’t know where his usual joking friend Steve had got too, with those two girls Hansini and Amita somewhere. I tried to listen to him but he talked so fast, I missed most of the jokes, but the men, even Brian, seemed to understand him.

        My mind was too distracted, I was thinking, ‘this was the man I was going to share my bed with tonight. This was the man I was going to make love-games with too.’ That sent a surge of excitement through my body.

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Hi Reshma again,

          When they decided to split our story into two sections it caught me by surprise considering the story was sitting completed, waiting to be uploaded to the blog. We had done our background notes already and now we had to do another background for the second story.

         Shandra suggested we should tell you about how we did the sex scenes. I was first surprised that she said that but when Rajah nodded his agreement I decided to give it a go. But I’m not telling you about the sex. That’s too private since it was real. What I will do is tell you how we came to do it. You will probably link the sex in the story back to us anyway. 

         Now we got to the point where most of the story was completed. The problem areas were the sex scenes. Apparently, they always are. I brought this up at a meeting and Ayaka suggested we try doing the scenes.

         “Try acting them out,” she suggested. “Kim and I did. It worked well.”

         “What? You mean, do each part in bed first?” I asked a bit amazed that she would suggest anything like that.

         “Yes, you and Rajah do it.”

         Now I really was shocked! Here she was suggesting that I go out and fuck my brother-in-law. All just to get our story right. But looking at her, it appeared she was dead serious. Looking around I noted a couple of others nod their head too. Rajah, of course, had a big grin – either thought he was going to get lucky or could see the funny side of this.

         That night we stayed over at the farm and in bed, my husband brought the subject up again.

         “Well Reshma, are you going to fuck him?” he asked.

         “No, of course not. I’m a married woman,” I replied.

         “I wouldn’t mind if you do. I’m sure your sister would be up for it too.”

         “What? You mean……”

         “Yes we do a swap,” he said. Then with a laugh, he added, “You do your research with Rajah and I’ll do some ‘research’ with Shandra.”

         “Do you fancy her?”

         “Yes, Reshma. I do, actually.”

         “Oh!” was all I answered. 

         A few days later, after thinking about it, I brought the subject up again. I wanted to confirm that he really was serious. He was so we discussed it further and decided to go for it. The way Rajah and Shandra were with the rest on the farm, I knew they would be up for it.

         A couple of weeks later we managed to do it during another visit to the farm. We used Kim’s bedroom with that nice big bed and Shandra and my hubby used their waterbed in their flat. It went well, our research got done, notes were taken and next morning we quickly finished the story.  

        Question: - Is the sex in the story the same as Rajah and I did?

        Reply: - Work that out for yourselves.  LOL

                                                             Reshma.

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Story 99 Part A Swapping Husbands.

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Part A  We Make a Plan.

Hi from Amita.

      This story is interesting because a girl in India and a girl in New Zealand are telling it together. Each will take their turns telling their parts of the story. I hope this does not get too confusing for everyone. Mega is new to writing so she got Hansini and I to help. You will also notice Jenny’s humour coming through in the story as well. I asked them to link into the other stories from this period too. So enough from me, let me hand over to Mega and Jenny.

First, it is me, Mega:-

         This will be the first time I have written anything for the Letters Books. I hope you are enjoying my writings. Now let me start.        

         We were back in our room on the evening after the Nude Cruise. It had been a nice day, a fun day enjoying the beautys of the Coral Reef. Even though I couldn’t swim I still was seeing the beauty of it from a glass bottom boat they had. Of course, Brian went on another tour because he is a good swimmer. They went snorkelling over the reef.

         I was watching them preparing to leave. The woman crew member was to be their guide while the man took us in the boat. She was issuing them the equipment they would be needing and gave the instructions on what to do. I would have liked to do this so I was close listening too.   

         Then without any hesitation, she just stripped off her uniform, a shorts and shirt, and then a bikini underneath until she was naked like us. She fitted on her mask and jumped off the boat. The others including Brian quickly followed her too. I had wondered if the crew ever went nude too and now at least I knew that the girl did.

         The fun on the boat was good too with us all being totally naked for the whole trip. We had the other group we had played the chess with and they were nice to be meeting and be knowing about them. They came from the other side of Australia within the city of Perth. Everyone being naked was good because we all enjoyed the games together. I know Katrina had been a bit nervous about this but I notice when us girls removed the clothes she was willing to follow too. 

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                                                                Posted by Rajah & Reshma.

Hi, Reshma here.
        I have known about my sister’s stories for a long time but I didn’t realise until they began publishing them what a big project this was. When I was 16, I got involved in one of their early adventures when I joined them for a nude beach holiday. You can read more about this holiday on the page called Brian’s Page. (See the Index Bar above)

        When I began reading their stories published online, being a schoolteacher, I began spotting silly mistakes in their work. I would email my sister with my comments until finally, they gave me my own password to go in and fix them myself. These days their correction process is much robust and they don’t seem to leave so many.

        One day when we were staying up at the farm, Anne invited me to look at one of their stories she was getting ready to publish. I pointed out a few things that could be improved and she created a copy and left me to make the changes. The result of this was that my husband and I did an extensive rewrite of the story, their version was dropped in favour of our new one. (See Letter 43)

         This led to me becoming much more involved in the writing side of the project until finally I began writing a story of my own. The problem was that ideas weren’t coming and I was struggling to make any progress. 

Rajah here.

         Reshma was having trouble getting started on her story so she pulled me in to help her. It was a story about getting together with a group on a smaller island for some group sex. We completed a lot of it but it really wasn’t working. It didn’t fit well with the rest of the Resort stories so finally, Anne put us out of our misery by pulling the plug on it at a writers meeting.

         That same meeting Susan stepped into things and suggested a new theme for us. This was Peter and Jenny getting together with Mega and Brian. Sort of like a parallel story to the one Kim and Ayaka had just completed, ‘Story 92  Four by Four-some.’

         We started into this and it was going well. Since we had a late start it was obvious we were going to miss our publishing deadline putting it in with the girl’s story, so our story got pushed back towards the end of the Resort stories. This meant we needed to develop sections of our story to blend in with the end of Shandra’s story about Katrina and the story about Steve and the two Indian girls, Amita and Hansini. Anne and Shandra helped us with this. 

Reshma again,

         Once we finished, the story went through the same reading, editing process as all the other stories do and many minor changes were made. Finally, we have come to the day when Rajah will push the button and our first story will be published. Hope you all like it. In the end, we were very happy with it.

         This is Part A, the second section, Part B, will be published next week.

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