Story 198 Naughty Joseph.

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Hi from Kalki,

        I heard they were going to hold a nude weekend up at the big house. I knew this would not just be everyone getting naked, there would be lots of sexual activity as well. Since joining in with the fun of Amita’s weekends, I’d had each of the men from India and so I was not scared to try with new partners. But now there were those from Australia and New Zealand too. Men, I didn’t know who might want with me.

        I was nervous about this and at one point even considered not attending. I talked to my husband Hamza, about my feelings. He was surprised I was feeling in this way. He reminded me of only a few days before I had welcomed a stranger, Peter, into our house and into my bed also, that very same night. So, what was the difference here? I think he was also thinking, if I stayed away, he would miss out too.

       “Kalki, you know at Sarvesh’s there is never pressure on anyone. Just enjoy yourself. Go with the flow.”

       Go with the flow! I’d not heard him say that before. He must have got it from the New Zealand men. So, I made my mind to go, to enjoy and be involved. To ‘go with the flow.’ Ha! Ha! I like that saying and I wondered what sexy adventures would go flowing to me. I was not to be knowing this would be happening soon after we arrived there. 

Story 198 Background.

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                                                                                        Posted by Kim & Ayaka.

Hi from Kim.

        As we got into the nude weekend the first-time period we had to fill was Friday afternoon. The idea for a nude weekend and planning for it has been covered by Julie in her story. Now our story was to take over with everyone arriving and settling into their first nude afternoon. The setting we chose for this was out by the pool. It would have been a hot afternoon so being outside in the shade, with some refreshing dips in the pool, seemed the way to go.

        Among our real group of writers and friends we sometimes get into these fighting games where the girls take on the men. More often than not, it is the men who win but in the end, we all have fun and often someone gets fucked too. I know it gets a bit rough and playing these games, some of us have got hurt. For example, me breaking my wrist while playing “Catch Princess” (our cat) when we fell off the desk onto the rockery. Susan fell on top of Princess and I, hurting us both. Or when we play that rough game “Bull Rush” there are often scrapes, cuts or bruises.

         There is something a bit sexual about fighting a man too. During the process, your body comes up against them, bodies in close contact. That is sexual enough but often there is a bit of sexual feeling-up too which adds more to the fun. As I’ve said above, some hot sex has come out of these games too. 
         Here is Ayaka now to tell you about our story.

Hi from Ayaka.

        I really enjoyed the story about Kalki and Peter (Story 192 Europeans in our House). Reshma had developed that shy girl by bringing out her cheeky side. In the end, even her husband had noticed it. I wanted to do more with this girl so Kim and I chose Kalki as our central character.

       The story begins with some almost admin type stuff. Our purpose here was to develop Sarvesh and Amita. I wanted Kalki to admire Amita as being a strong, capable woman. I wanted the story to stray into some technical things like the gate and security systems as a way of displaying a new side of Amita.

       Next came to the fun by the pool when the men decide to throw all the women in the pool. It was here that Joseph singled out Kalki by trying to throw her in the pool. I have a feeling that in spite of her protests, his attention is more than welcome. Certainly, it was by the time they got to the fuck scene on the table. A nice sex scene to finish off and we were done.

       They also asked that as much as possible we do this whole story ourselves since some readers have been pointing out how our are writing styles are blending together. We have just used each other to check our work with Reshma doing a final check for spelling and grammar. Keeping in mind that we often use badly worded grammar on purpose to reflect the English writing skills of those from India.

       So go on now, enjoy our story.
              Kim & Ayaka.

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Story 197 The Nude Weekend.

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Hi from Amita,

         Well, it had been so nice having all our friends in India but sadly, their holiday was fast coming to an end. Just one weekend left, just a few days and they would be leaving so Sarvesh and I had planned it to be special. Sort of go out with a bang if you are getting for my meaning. Well, I intended getting ‘banged,’ that was for sure!

        The week after the wedding had gone fast. Katrina and David were away on their honeymoon, a short trip to visit places in North India. Two other couples, Betty and Tom; Joyce and Jeremy had gone with them. It seemed funny, other people going with them on their honeymoon but they seemed Ok with it. I did ask Katrina but she said she was happy having those other couples with them so it looked like my husband got it right that time.

       Meanwhile, David’s family had to leave to return to Australia. I knew they had a few days stop-over in Singapore and so I asked Sarvesh if he could help. Sarvesh and David’s father talked and then both went into the company office. Air flights couldn’t be changed but I hear he got them upgraded to that hotel we usually use. He also helped arrange some tours and a meal at a up-market restaurant too. I was happy Sarvesh could do that for them.

Story 197 Background

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                                                                                        Posted by Julie.

Hi from Julie.

       We were at a writers meeting when they were discussing the nude weekend series of stories. It quickly became clear that this was going to be a biggie. The main writers were taking different parts but Susan seemed to think we needed an opening story. Sort of a way introducing the whole idea and getting Sarvesh to layout how the weekend would go. It sounded easy enough so when Susan offered it to me I agreed to give it a hit.

       Now, Anne had another pet project she has been working on concerning Amita driving. No one but her had any idea where this was going. After the meeting, she took me aside and asked if I wanted to add driving into my story since she wanted to bring this theme to a head. We worked out a few ideas until the driving became the central theme of this story. I rather liked that idea to tell you the truth. It made the story just that bit more interesting while at the same time making it a bit more challenging for me as a new writer.

      I touched base with Shandra to get a bit of Indian culture into the story. She suggested crazy traffic and the restaurant. She also said that Sarvesh, being very wealthy, most like wouldn’t drive himself or deal with simple things like buying from local trade people.

      I talked with Susan and she said the story needed a sex scene. Of course it does, this is a sexy blog, isn't it? I wondered about this and almost changed it to an overnight trip but then Allan who had been sitting with my husband Brian suggested the idea of a driving fantasy. The two men bounced ideas off each other and almost knocked out that last section. When Anne agreed, after all, the driving theme was her baby, in it went.

      So there I was, with all these ideas and a small pile of notes, I went home to write. The story proved very easy to write and went together very quickly. By mid-April, I was completed and ready for uploading when I was told Shandra was jumping in first with her story. I was surprised but it sort of makes sense when you read her story.   

          (Uploaded for Julie by Asami.) 

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Story 196 Two Men in My Life – Part One.

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The Nude Weekend.

Note from writing team: -

         This next volume mainly concerns the final weekend in India, the nude weekend. There were several events happening during this weekend, plus other side adventures too, so we have included a summary as part of this first story to help you put it all together in your minds.  

         Various writers have taken different characters and so the stories will tend to mix together and overlap but we hope each will throw new insights into what is going on.

         The final story of this series will be when everyone leaves to return to their homes. Of course, Katrina will leave with David and the Australians too. 

Friday –

       Morning staff leave and everyone arrived.

       Lunch and fun in the pool.

       Evening a stripping game “Strip XX.”

Saturday –

       Games – Strip Chess Contest.

       Naughty Couples Night. Movie director.

Sunday –

       Planning session for writing the stories.

       Costume Ripper Stripper Party. Anything goes contest.   

Monday – Clean-up and get ready to leave.

         Hope you all enjoy.

                  Susan & Anne

                           For the writing team.

Story 196 Background

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Shandra Here.

       When we were beginning the wedding stories there was a debate about what to do after that. Of course, the long-term plan is always to go to Letters the Next Generation but before then should we do more with the current group? We had them all in India so there was an idea for a nude weekend. This was supposed to have been a story, maybe two stories, after the wedding but as ideas were bounced around one meeting, it became obvious we could do a lot more. The question then arose, is there enough for an entire volume?

       The general feeling among the writers was that we could do enough stories. The more relaxed writing and publishing schedule meant that stories could almost be written as we went so it was agreed to go for it.

       We open with an admin section from Shanti. We believe these stories might mean more if you had a list of events to refer back to. It is certainly helping the writing team to link everything together. The Nude Weekend lasted over an entire weekend, beginning on Friday and ending on Monday. Everyone, all the main characters from the stories attended and joined in the fun. There are lots we can do with this and new ideas are being added as we write.

        Now to my story. Since Katrina is leaving for Australia and she wanted to spend a night with the two men who had been important to her during her sexual journey. Of course, you've guessed it, one is Mike and the other is Sarvesh. This story focuses on the night Katrina and David spent with Amita and Sarvesh. It is two views of the evening, from both Katrina and David and while in many parts they overlap, they both see the events in different ways. We've done this sort of thing a lot in our stories.

         While this story is set in the short period between when Katrina and David arrived back from their honeymoon and the beginning of the Nude Weekend, we still consider it as part of the weekend, you might say a warm-up for what is about to come. So, most of the story is about sex. Really, just one big sex scene moving through the shower, the spa and the bed.     

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Story 195 Katrina gets Married - Part Three.

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A word from writer Anne.
       Sorry for this story. It has got overlapped by the nude weekend stories. In the end, we got bored with it. We would have pulled the whole section but already Section One had been published. Since we had to carry on, Susan and I have rushed to complete it so we can move on to better things. 

Sub-Story E - Breakfast in the Game Reserve.

Hi from Shanti

       It was just getting light as we arrived at the smaller lake. They had set up tables for breakfast out on the viewing decks. It was perfect. A clear, still morning where we could watch the sun rise over the lake.
       The only real formal part of this event came after the meal. Mootie was giving a good speech until he managed to stuff it up at the end.
       “Well, David,” he said. “Your last breakfast as a free man. Now is the time to run.......”
       He didn’t get to finish, the outcry from us women, put an end to any more talking.
       Hansini did manage to add, “You run now David and I’m coming after you with Shanti’s crocodile gun.” That got a laugh from everyone.
       After breakfast, the park landrovers took us back to the main park centre where our bus was waiting. It was only a short trip to the station where Katrina would arrive. Some stayed to wait while the rest of us went on to the club. From what I hear, maybe I should have waited to see the train arrive too.

Story 195 Part Three Background.

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Anne Here.
        We struggled with this one. I think partly because the big plans we had just didn't work out and partly because the developing stories surrounding the nude weekend caused us to lose interest. I was about to let it go and publish it as it was when Susan stopped me. She asked if I'd let her add a sex scene to spice it up a bit. I really didn't know how she would do this but she seemed confident enough so I let her have a go.
        The outcome was that sexy part where Sairu and Jeremy slip away from the party together. Her first draft was good but once we had worked over it together it was even better since we added that bit where they got found out afterwards. It's good Susan. You did well.
        Now that became the driving force behind us having another go at the rest of the story. Really it just took a bit more detail to turn it into a half decent story. Just to finish it off I added that fun bit during Katrina's speech which made a few of them laugh when I read it at the meeting.

       So that is it. The wedding is behind us now. Let's move on to the nude weekend. I'm writing this on Sunday evening the 9th of April and already one story is complete and five others are underway. There is a list of another six possible stories after that. (For you Janet it's another sex possible stories. LOL) So it's going to be fun writing and publishing them. I think our story characters are going to have lots of fun too. Well, they better or else the stories won't be much fun.

      That is all from me.
                      Anne.

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Story 195 Katrina gets Married – Part Two.

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My Opener - by Shanti.
       My husband Mike and Amita were sent to Kadapa to meet David's family. I saw from the start that there was going to be some sexy fun. Two naughty people like them, left alone in a hotel overnight? Come on, it's a no-brainer. You just know something is going to happen. I'm not sure why but Mike has always been attracted to Amita. I feel that attraction is shared by her too. She certainly looked very pleased when she discovered she was going with him.
       I wasn't there when they left because we had gone over to the Game Reserve for the afternoon. Before that, I was with Mike in our room when he was throwing a few things into a bag. You know how guys do it. Things are selected and fly across the room to land roughly in the general location of the bag, to be all stuffed in at the last minute.
      "Have a safe trip," I told him.
      "Thanks, honey, I will."
      "Have fun with Amita too," I added with a grin.
      "I'll do that too," he laughed.
      Then he added, "What about you Shanti?"
      "Oh, don't worry about me, Mike. I intend to have fun too."
      "Oh?"
      "Mike, you know me. Of course, I'll get something going."
      "Maybe keep Sarvesh company," he suggested.
      "Now that's an idea," I agreed.
      We hugged each other and I left him to his packing while I headed to where they were waiting at the bus but I noticed he followed me out to see us off.
      I gave him a last-minute hug and just as I turned away he added, "And leave that waiter alone too."
      "What?"
      "You heard me. The guy you were checking out at the dinner yesterday."
      "Oooohhh!"
      "There's enough guys around here without you hunting fresh meat."
      I heard Hansini laugh.
      "That goes for you too," he told her as we both climbed on to the bus.
          
  

Story 195 Part Two Background.

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                                                                                        Posted by Reshma & Susan.

Reshma,

         Part Two of the Wedding Story. I was given the task. They showed me the overall plan, which has been included in Part One and then Susan laid out the two main goals for the story. 1) Prepare Katrina and get her on the wedding train. 2) Meet David’s family at the airport.

        It was quickly obvious that this would be two separate stories with two groups going off in opposite directions. It was also obvious that with them going off like this there would be possibilities of sexual encounters too.

        Mike and Amita going off together, that was a no-brainer. All I needed to do was arrange for them to stay somewhere overnight. I quickly laid out the main details of the story and started writing it. Both of these were older characters and so I wanted to bring them out well. We all know Amita is a wild one in bed. Reading through the stories, Mike has had his moments too. Two well-known people and it would be a challenge putting them together.

        Now, the second part where Steve & Peter went off with Lizamoa, looked to be a lot more complexed. See, Lizamoa was supposed to be helping prepare while the two boys were off preparing some steam train. It was clear I needed help here. My step-father, Allan snr, likes trains so I asked him to help. Much of that train stuff was written by him with me just changing a few things to blend it into my story. But with the three of them, it would most likely end with her having three-some with the two boys so that is the way I went with it.

        So by the time the next writers meet came around I had a lot to show of my story. They liked the ideas and sex scenes even though those parts were only partly done. They also liked the steam engine too. Then Julie suggested that I could add a new part where Sarvesh got up to some mischief while Amita was away with Mike. The outcome of this was that Susan quickly wrote the part where Sarvesh and Shanti get together. In the end that was the last part started and the first part finished. Susan then went on to help with my other sex scenes. I know Anne helped a bit too.

Susan,

       Don’t let my helping take away anything from Reshma. This was her story. I only did the scene with Sarvesh and Shanti. I then just spiced up her other sex scenes a bit too. Spiced up? Of course, why not? They are in India. LOL.

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Story 195 Katrina gets Married – Part One.

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Introduction.

Amita here.   

        This is the big one – the climax of this volume. It will not be a very sexy story but certainly important to the main storyline of Letters so we’ve decided to include it. (But be warned, something sexy might manage to sneak in.) So for any of you who are just looking for sexy stories, just read “Katrina and David got married,” and move on. For the rest of you, I hope you enjoy this story or should I say series of stories. Yes stories, while this story will mainly to be told by Shanti since she couldn't be everywhere at once, others took parts too. It’s been divided into a series of short sub-sections as listed just below.

Story 195 Part One Background.

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                                                                                        Posted by Anne.

         As far back as 2009, as soon as we realised that there was a relationship building between Katrina and David, we knew there was going to be a wedding. A number of times I have sat down to write this story but in each case, things didn’t go so well. As more and more new ideas and stories were added, it didn’t seem a high priority so I left it.

        Now, we need this story. On two earlier occasions where weddings were mentioned we just rushed over them and moved on. This time it had to be a good one since we’ve been building towards this wedding through these last few volumes.

       Susan called a meeting to discuss how this would go. First, it was broadly fixed that I would manage the wedding section of stories and Susan would manage the nude weekend that would follow later in a new volume. The rest of the team would be involved in both these projects by writing smaller sections as we developed and wrote the main story.

       For example – in this section, I wrote the first half as an opening section and then the real Brian and his wife Julie wrote the section about the landscaping feature at Sarvesh’s house. Susan and Allan added to this by writing the conversation when Sarvesh comes home and finds Shanti, stripped down to her bikini top, in the mud helping.

       Susan has also written about Mike and Amita going to meet David’s family. She added the part where Amita arrives back driving one of the vans. The story hints at some sexual attraction between Amita and Brian where she is checking him out, hot and sweaty without a shirt. Don't you believe anyone who tells you us girls don't notice fit, hunky guys, sweaty without their shirts!

        So this story gives us an overview of the wedding. It’s become a complexed story with many parts moving forward at the same time so we’ve broken them into sections told by various characters while Shanti’s background holds it all together. In the story, this is explained by Shanti being given the job of recording everything that was going on.

        Ayaka came up with the idea of providing a summary, almost index of how these sections will be laid out. This could be helpful so I used it as part of my opening.

        Now last March, Ayaka got married and just last Saturday, her younger sister Asami, did too. You can see getting married and weddings are on our minds at the moment. So are the naughty parties that follow them a few days later, once family has left. So many of the themes and ideas used here, came from these real events, being modified for the setting of our stories.

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Story 194 India - Part Five - Trip to North India.

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Part Five - Trip to North India.

          Now, this is part of our India visit that neither Tom nor I were expecting. We were going on a trip to North India. It had been arranged and paid for by Sarvesh and what surprised me, was that we were going with David and Katrina. This was strange! Travelling on the honeymoon with the bride and groom! Anyway, we weren’t alone, we had the young couple from Australia, Jeremy and Joyce, also with us on this surprise trip. I remember reading about a similar trip to this that was taken by a group many years ago. While that trip might have been more extensive our trip but we still covered some very interesting places.

         Our flight to North India landed in Delhi. This large city that brings to life the ancient past of India contrasted against India's modern future. It's divided into two parts, the crumbling old city of Old Delhi, and the orderly and well planned New Delhi.

         Sarvesh had said, “It would be a huge loss to visit India and miss out on seeing the Taj Mahal in Agra. After all, it's India's most famous monument -- and certainly the most identifiable.”

         We stayed one night in Agra, viewing this most beautiful building on the day we travelled there. Back at our hotel, not far from the Taj Mahal we sat eating our dinner as the sun set turning the building to golds and pinks. I thought that was beautiful but there was even better to come. An hour or so later we watched the full moon rise and then used the second part of our ticket, touring it again by moonlight. This was amazing!

        What I didn’t like about this trip to North India was people always approaching us, offering special deals and services. This was a constant hassle that didn’t seem apparent in the small town in South India. Amita told me later that word had got around that these overseas visitors were guests of Sarvesh so we were left alone in that town but that this is a problem for tourists, all over India.

       After a couple more nights in Delhi visiting local attractions, we were on our way back to South India again. Yes, as I said before it was short but very enjoyable. Thank you, Sarvesh. That was a lovely surprise. 

Story 194 Part Five Background.

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                                                                                        Written by Mary.

          Yes, I know, I wrote this story, I am Mary the new writer. They helped me out with the extra writing of backgrounds so I could concentrate on getting the story sections ready. I thought I better at least do one of these. Allan was supposed to be doing this one.   

        This was a big project for me but I enjoyed it. I’m very pleased with the results and seeing more and more of my work appearing online. I think one of the hardest parts was trying to fit in with the existing stories regarding characters and places etc. Other new writers have had the same problem because in many ways there is a ‘world’ that has grown up around these stories. But I did have Susan and Anne to advise and help me. What those two don’t know about this the main Letters storyline, just isn’t worth knowing.

        When I began planning this story it soon became clear it was going to be a number of four or five short stories joined together. I asked if I could keep them as shorter stories and they said I could do as I wanted. In the end, it became five stories of which this is the last. I did consider another about Betty and Tom at the big nude day but this seemed very similar to the true story Ronnie and I are writing so I decided to end here.

        Now, this blog is a collection of naughty, sexy stories and so we really needed some sexual adventures in my stories too. At first, I intended having only a couple but then after talking with Susan, we decided on a scene for each story. This added a lot of extra work because as has been said before, good sex scenes are not easy to write but I hope you'll agree, the end result has been worth it.  

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Story 194 India - Part Four - The Wedding.

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Part Four – The Wedding.

         The day of the wedding was a complexed day for us with a number of functions we had to attend. First, there was an early breakfast at the restaurant in the Game Reserve. This was a private function before the park opened to the public.

         A beautiful location on a deck overlooking a large lake, it was very early as we wanted to catch the sunrise over the lake; the water was still, hardly a ripple. We watched birds diving over the water, catching small insects that had come in to drink. Hansini pointed out one of the small cabins on the far side which was where the couple would spend their first married night together.

         Of course, David was the guest of honour at this breakfast as it was his big day. His family and all of us from the Letters group were there. There were also a few others from India I didn’t know. Katrina’s father was there too since he couldn’t be with his daughter for her special breakfast on the train.

Story 194 Part Four Background.

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                                                                                        Written by Reshma.

          Yes, I know, I didn’t write or publish this story, our new writer Mary did but we’ve decided not to burden her with the extra writing of backgrounds, instead just concentrate on getting her story sections ready.

          By the time Mary got to this section, we were well underway with the writing of Katrina’s Wedding. She was able to read our notes and parts we had completed and she used that to write Betty’s view of the wedding. That took up the first part of her story, the non-sexy part. What she wrote here, also had an effect on our story, we found ourselves making changes to our work as well. For example, we had written that the wedding train had arrived in the main town. Mary and Susan made it into a temporary station on the other side of the river. Remember we had always had the club/hotel placed in the town too until Asami moved it across the river in Story 187 Part Two.

         Now came that big sex scene where these two horny older women managed to arrange a night with a hot, sexy younger guy. In Mary’s case, she worked from her own experience again. One night, Mary and a friend called Deanna arranged to spend their night with a guy called Paul. You'll know Paul from the comments he makes in this blog. What appears in this story is said to be closely based on that night. I even hear that Mary consulted but Deanna and Paul as she wrote this section. Once again the end result was cleaned up with the help of our sex scene expert, Susan (Sexy Sue). 

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Story 194 India - Part Three - On to India.

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Part Three – On to India.

         Our flight to India was also with Singapore Airlines. It was really an early flight, still dark when we left the hotel for the airport. It was a bigger group now but didn’t take too long to get through and ready to board our next flight.

        This flight took us out over the Indian Ocean and on to India. This time Mike was sitting beside us and he said he was hiding from Shanti. I wasn’t sure what he meant by that until I read their story about the flight from New Zealand. (Story 187 Travelling to India - Part One.)

         Our first landfall in India was a very large city called Hyderabad. I hadn’t even heard of it until a few days before our trip and it is one of the largest cities in India. Shows how much I know! We’d had been flying over India for quite some time before we came in on final approach, preparing for landing. As we came around towards the airport I caught sight of the city, a cluster of very tall buildings in the distance, surrounded by many small buildings and houses. It looked to be a huge city. We came in fast and low over a busy road and we were down.

        The airport was modern and efficient, we were processed quickly. Once we had our bags we headed towards our smaller flight. Others seemed to know where they were going so Tom and I just followed along with the group. I had Carol, one of the twins, with me again. She seemed to like being with me as long as her mother and sister were close by. Part of the time she walked and partly I carried her.

Story 194 Part Three Background.

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                                                                                        Written by Shandra.

          Mary had enough with getting her story sections together without the burden of writing extra backgrounds, we each took a part of her story and provided background notes.

         Mary quickly wrote the first part of this section getting Betty and Tom to India and settled into Jeevan and Mandara’s house. It is not the first time that this journey has been described so I did suggest she jump over it but Mary thought Betty would want to tell us about her first impressions of a new country. So I pointed out two other stories where this had been done before so she could read them before writing her own version.

        Now one day Mary was over at Anne’s place and we were discussing the sex scene. She wanted them to start outside on a deck overlooking the town before moving into the bedrooms. Now we were a bit concerned about this because two couples sitting together had been done a few times and we didn’t want her to repeat this.

       She also wanted Tom to be involved in the story by telling what happened to him as well. So that led to this sort of parallel story where they both gave their account of the conversation leading to Mandara ending up topless. I mentioned that more often than not, two people will give different accounts of the same event. She took this on board too.

       Now finally came that sex with Jeevan. On a few occasions, we have written about how he takes things slowly and builds up to some amazing, mind blowing orgasms for his sex partners. I suggested that perhaps Betty will experience the same thing. Mary loved that idea and what she wrote was really good. There was not much I thought needed changing except in a couple of places where she tended to repeat herself a bit. With Susan’s help, she got these problems sorted, cleaned up so the scene flowed better and here it is Part Three complete. 

        Mary tells us that part of these sex scenes are based on when they invited Bill (Susan's father) and his girlfriend Sally over for the evening. So like most of our stories, there is a true story somewhere in the background. Most likely, it is not the same as you read here but still an inspiration for the writer. 

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Story 194 India - Part Two - Our Singapore Stopover.

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Part Two – Our Singapore Stopover.

Hi Betty again,

          Our trip came up fast. Before we knew it we were in the last few days before we would leave, packing and preparing to go. Since it was almost the off-season, we dried off the cows a bit early so there was no milking on the farm. One of our sons brought his young family up and they stayed to keep an eye on the place, feed the animals etc.

         The day before our trip we drove down to Auckland and stayed with Mike and Shanti. This was to make it easier getting to the airport the following morning. Shanti and the three children were there but Mike was at work. It was nice spending time with them and before long Mike arrived. Shanti had cooked dinner for us that night then we spent a lovely evening with them as they told us about some of the final details of our trip and showed us photos of the town we would be visiting in India.

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                                                                                        Written by Susan.

          We didn’t write or publish this story, our new writer Mary did. We’ve just taken over the backgrounds so, she can concentrate on getting her story sections ready.

          So Mary had to get Betty and Tom to Singapore and do whatever they were going to do there. We all thought she would write them straight through to India but she didn’t. She wanted Betty and Tom to have some fun in Singapore, soon getting distracted with that sex scene with Donald and Paula. When we heard she was writing that, Allan added a short comment into Story 187 Part One that Betty and Tom did something with Donald and Paula. I like the idea of linking stories together like that. Somehow it makes them feel just that little bit real.

         I thought Mary was quite daring dividing her story into two with a second account of what Tom and Paula did. Writing as a man can be challenging, men don’t think like normal people (LOL), but for the most part, she did well. We just advised and helped a bit as she needed it. So here was are, two stories under her belt and she hasn’t even got Betty and Tom to India yet. But then, it's not really about them just getting to India, is it? It's really all about the fun and sex they have along the way.

         I’m really pleased that Mary tackled this and so proud of what she has done. We have considered her and Ronnie as part of our team for a while now but I want to say to you Mary, “You really are a Writer of Letters now. You can hold your work up and stand proudly beside us.”

         Big hug from me!
                       Sexy Sue.

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