Tuesday, 21 April 2020
Story 237 Background.
Hi from Kim & Allan.
What is a Lizamoa Special?
You longer-term readers, (thought it better not to say older readers), should know but newer readers might not. Lizamoa is first mentioned in Letter 2 as being Joseph's wife. We first learn her name in Letter 6. In Letter 37B and Letter 38B is the first time she is with a man other than her husband. She was with Mike and before they go to bed together they have a shower together. Lizamoa wears her sari with a red swimsuit underneath, into the shower. She does variations of this a few more times with different men until wearing full clothes in the shower becomes known by the writer's team as a Lizamoa Special.
Kalki decides to try this with her husband which gives us the title and theme of this story. In my next Story 238, Kalki will develop this idea even further. More about that next time.
Why Kalki?
Back in those early stories, Lizamoa was the darling of the writers. The character we all loved and wrote about. As the stories continued, Katrina took over that title. Now since Katrina is married and gone to Australia, Kalki seems to be taking that role. It is likely my two stories are going to do a lot to encourage that.
Kalki attracts me as a character as she is a bit younger than her husband and their friends. There is a lot of Allan snr and me in that. She also comes across as shy, lacking confidence but getting past that you find a woman who is fun-loving, cheeky and sexy. Is that a bit like me?
My story here will add that she has a growing appetite for sex but a deep love for her husband. The European couple Peter and Jenny made a big difference to Kalki and Hamza's relationship during their visit to India for Katrina's wedding Story 192 Europeans in Our House. Kalki mentions this in her story too.
Allan snr adds,
When Kim started writing these two stories in was inevitable I would get involved, read get dragged in. My idea with sex scenes is that they both have amazing sex with lots of orgasms, everything is perfect. Don't we all wish? But Kim likes the realism of the sex scenes, good but not always perfect. We clashed on that with this story but it worked in the end.
Hamza, couldn't hold back in the sex in the bathroom and came before Kalki could even get going. I suppose you could call that the not so perfect. LOL But in the bedroom, he gives her two great orgasms. Cumming three times in such a short period of time? That must be the perfect, the wow factor. Amazing! LOL
So that is about it. Our story is done. There is Part Two, Story 238, almost finished too. So watch out for that in a week or so.
Allan snr & Kimberley.
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This background is a bit different. More what I would expect with the name background. I think more what they intended backgrounds to be.
ReplyDeleteYes I knew about those earlier stories. In fact, I helped write Letter 6. When Shandra got stuck, she came to Susan and I. I remember sitting down one afternoon and we put Shandra's ideas into a story written by Joseph. Talking about Joseph, we have not seen any writing by him for a very long time where Shanti, the other original story teller appears all the time.
Enjoyed your story, Kim and Allan.
Brian.
Kia ora,
DeleteThanks for this background. I am as you would call a newer reader. It was very useful to get that background information with links.
Kia kaka - Mahuiko
Some Background.
ReplyDeleteOf the three original writers, Anne, Susan and Shandra (me), I am considered the shy, quiet one. Someone who stays back a bit but quite capable of getting into the action when she feels in the mood. I invented all three characters Kim mentions above, Lizamoa, Katina and Kalki, to be similar to me in this. We have strong personalities in our stories, Shanti, Sarvesh, Joseph, Amita, etc, so we need characters to balance this which is where women like Kalki come in.
It has been said that I create most of the characters in this blog and then let the loose for other writers to play with. There is actually a lot of truth in this. While I encourage writers to keep in the characters of those they are using in their stories, I do enjoy following my characters and watching how others develop them.
It had been my intention that Sairu would have a stronger personality than Kalki and would therefore feature more in the stories but it hasn't worked out like that. Kalki has been a hit with some of the writers, found a place for herself and shines in many of her own stories.
This happened with Katrina too. She was started as a support character but when we started the series on her story, she became a star of this blog. After Shanti, I think Katrina would be one of the most popular characters in our stories.
Hope this is helpful to our newer readers.
Shandra
That is interesting Shandra. So you invented most of the people in the stories?
DeleteYou must have so much knowledge about this blog. I have heard how other writers will often consult you when they are doing a story.
Nina.
Yes, you are right Nina.
DeleteAn example of this happened a few weeks ago when Kim asking me about Kalki. What daring clothing would she be likely to wear out in a public restaurant? This question concerned both the culture of small town southern India and Kalki's own personality. The resulting discussion between some of us writers will be seen in Kim's next story. This morning I've been again helping with some details of that.
Shandra.
I am interested in where you get all the ideas for people from. I know you often name them after readers and sometimes the fictional character will take some of the read person but most often they are different too.
DeleteI feel when I come in here there is another world with friends whom I know. I think that is due to your attempting to make the people and the stories appear a bit real.
Nina.
Kia ora, my naughty friends,
ReplyDeleteAnother story. Lock-down has been good for this blog. It is Kim this time, with help from her naughty boyfriend, Allan snr. I had the feeling that you have stepped away from your usual style and theme for this one. But I could still see both of you in the writing even though you tried to hide it behind Kalki's speaking style.
Above, Shandra and Nina are having a discussion about character personality. That is something that stood out for me with this story. You really gave us some new insight into Kalki. Hamza, has changed but still seems a bit formal for my liking but poor guy has had a lot changing in his relationship with Kalki. You wrote that she was really driving this story as well as telling us about it.
One line stood out to me where Hamza finds Kalki is on top and he says, "You are the boss, tonight." That is actually a big thing for him to say. It also shows the skilled use you make of conversation. Was Anne's Allan involved in this too?
Ok, technically a strong story that seemed to wander at first until it finds where it is going. Once that has been established we move forward steadily towards the climax sex at the end. You used the unsuccessful sex in the bathroom to develop the story and give us further insight into Kalki and Hamza. With Simon and Mega from Story 236 it had become a big deal but here they seemed to get over it with the attitude, "Let's go to the bed and make it good." That shows their more mature relationship. They know each other better.
Two mistakes Kim. Three suggestions of small improvements and clarifications. Good work. The standard of writing in this blog has definitely improved. Keep it up everyone.
(No Allan - I don't mean keep that up! You men can do enough of that without my encouragement. LOL)
Kia kaka - Moa.
Kia ora Moa,
DeleteThank you for your comments. I always enjoy reading them. You've helped us so much. I often hear someone say, "What would Moa say about that."
Oh, and when you kick Allan jun's arse, that's a bonus too.
LOL Kim.
You like that do you Kim?
DeleteWell, perhaps we'd better include your boyfriend, Allan snr in that.
He could do with his arse kicked too.
Moa.
Oh Moa, we are getting quite bold now there is a lock-down and you are safe way up there.
DeleteFirst arranging for ice cold water to be tipped over my son while he was having an afternoon nape. Now you want to kick my arse.
Been hanging out with bad Japanese girls I think.
LOL. Allan snr.