Letter 56 Part C Story Night

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Part C – Nude Beach and Wet T-shirts.

Mandara – Letter 33     Going to the Nudist Beach.

It's Shanti again as I continue with my story.
        “Now, Lizamoa, when you came to New Zealand, you were doing even more than just showing to one man. In Letter 33, you are talking about going to a beach and taking the bikini top and the bottom off as well,” said Mandara. “Was this really your idea?”
        Before she could reply, Joseph cut in and said, “Yes we were having breakfast the morning after we had played the game strip. We were talking about the evening and how we had ended up naked in front of seven other people.
        I asked Lizamoa how did she feel, showing her nude body to all those people, and she replied that once she had her clothes off, she liked it a bit. She also said she would like to do it again, too.”
        “It was then that Lizamoa made that suggestion that surprised all of us,” began Mike. “Suddenly, she began asking me about a nude beach. I told her that there was one not too far from where we lived, and then she shocked us all by asking if we could go and see it. I explained to her that everyone there would be naked, and she replied that she knew that. Here, let me quote from the letter.”
        Mike reached over and took the letter book off Mandara. He flicked over a couple of pages and then began reading.

Letter 56 Part C Background.

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            The final part of this story’s background has been left to me, Susan, to tell.
            The stories continued with Mandara asking about Letter 33 “The Nude Beach.” They talked about it, and then Peter suggested Mike take Mandara to a nude beach. What they did on the “beach” was probably not what you would do on a normal nude beach, but they had some fun. Well, Mandara certainly did as Mike gave her a massive orgasm.
            There was another surprise for Lizamoa when Amita produced the T-shirt Liz had actually worn in the contest in New Zealand. Shanti said she was surprised that Liz still kept that. Back in that first story, she had asked if she could keep it, and here she was wearing it again while Peter wet it for her.
            The “wet T-shirt contest” which followed went far beyond what would happen in a normal contest, but it seems that everyone had a lot of fun doing it. At one point, it looked like it was going to turn into a full-on water fight when the girls turned on the two water boys, Peter and Steve, and gave them some of their own back.
            Finally, once the contest was over and all six girls had been announced as 1st equal, they all decided to go for another swim.
            The afternoon finishes with Mandara asking if all the stories are real. We learn from Shanti and Joseph that only a few of the very early ones were made up, while the rest they claimed as being real adventures.
            Writer's (Real as being part of this fiction world.)

            Next week, we get to play a game of Dominoes. Ever played Dominoes? Well, these guys might be playing it slightly differently from how you would have played it.

            Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        Susan.

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Letter 56 Part B Story Night.

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Part B - The Stories Begin.

It's Shanti again as I continue with my story.
        This was when Amita introduced the game she wanted us to play. This game was about the many letters and stories we had written. The idea was for each of our friends to pick out their favourite letter, and we would tell them about the story and answer any questions.
        It meant we would have eight stories to discuss during the afternoon and early evening.

Letter 56 Part B Background

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Hi, Anne here.
            Last week, Shandra told you how the Story Night started as a short letter but evolved into two letters. The first one became the story “Crocodile Hunter.” The second one retained the name “Story Night” but was later cut into three sections for posting on this blog/site. This week, I want to tell you where the idea came from and the purpose of this letter.
            First, the idea of having a story night. Back in Letter 45, when Mike and Shanti arrived in India, they had an evening where the letter book and the photo albums were shown to their Indian friends. The purpose of this first story was to launch the Indian Trip into some sexy adventures almost from the start. While I suggested this story, I wasn’t actually involved in writing much of it.
            So, since there has always been keen competition between Shandra and me, it was only natural that I wanted to have a go at a similar story. Originally, this was going to be Letter 52, where the albums were shown to the New Zealand couples, but this didn’t turn out like that, as we finally decided just to mention that they had seen the albums.
            So when I suggested that we do a Story Night, the other girls were against it. They said it would just turn out to be a copy of the earlier story. But I told them I wanted to have an evening where each person gets to select their favourite story, and Shanti or Joseph would tell them about it. They were still not too keen, but they agreed to let me have a go and see where it went.
            Once I got started, the idea sort of took off. Soon, both Susan and Shandra became involved with the writing. Allan then revised much of the conversation and made a few other improvements. Finally, more recently, Ayaka and Kim had a go at some scenes as well. Rajah did some work too. Yes, I know what you are saying:- “Another joint venture.” And of course, you are right.
            There is another purpose for this story as well. The story provides extra material to develop the characters that will be playing major roles in the Dominoes stories. It also gives us some interesting insights into some of these earlier stories as well.

            Now, about the story itself. Amita launches the game by asking about Letter 17 The Secret Watcher at the Beach. During this conversation, they get Shanti to admit that she did actually enjoy putting on a show for that guy up on the cliff.
            Then we come to Peter asking about the Sex at the Christmas Tree Farm in Letter 43. Perhaps the highlight of this section is that exchange between Peter and Lizamoa when Liz jumps up to defend Mike and Shanti against his teasing. Originally, this was just a couple of sentences until our new writer team got involved.
            They turned the conversation into a more heated exchange where Lizamoa really goes for Peter for suggesting that Mike was in any way using Shanti. Peter is a bit shocked at this and tries to back out of what he said, but Liz is having none of that, as she is still going for him. Finally, Joseph steps in and calms her down. I like this because I think it develops and brings out a new side to Lizamoa’s personality, which we haven’t seen much of until this point.  Good work, Ayaka and Kim.
            Finally, we finished this section with a smart remark from Steve, which got him told off by his wife.

            Well, the stories continued with each person selecting a story. When it came to the ice cream story, we suddenly discovered why Mike was taken away by Amita. They need someone to show them how to roll an ice cream ball. The ice cream story also took things to a new level because from then on, they began acting out parts of the stories. Like, for example, Lizamoa showing them what she was doing beside the lake in a very hot scene.
            This section ends with a short conversation that introduces someone who is to become an important character in the Letters Series. We discover that the watcher from the lake in Letter 14 “The Nude Photography Session by the Lake”, is a man called Mootie whom Joseph had actually hired to work in the Game Reserve. Then Lizamoa was shocked to learn that she had actually seen him that very day, and Mike and Shanti had been talking to him.

            Next week, we get the third and final section of this story. You do not want to miss what happens when Sarvesh asks about the Wet T-shirt contest.

            Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        Anne.

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Letter 56 Part A Story Night.

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From Shanti,            
Titirangi,            
Auckland,            
New Zealand.            

            To Joseph,
            The Game Reserve,
            Andhra Pradesh,
            India.

Part A - Lizamoa’s Naughty Pussy.

Hi Joseph and Lizamoa,
        Hi from New Zealand again. We hope this letter finds you both, sorry, I mean the three of you, in the very best of health and happiness. How are you managing with the baby, Lizamoa?
        Here in New Zealand, we are fine. As we told you via Email, the baby arrived safely, and everyone is saying I had an easy time of it, too. I still thought it was hard enough having to get that big head through my tiny little hole. There should be a better way than this. Maybe we could just go somewhere and they take an egg off me, then Mike comes along and pours his cum all over it. Nine months later, we just go back and pick up our new baby. Wouldn’t that be much simpler?
        But then again, once it was all over and I was holding darling Kathy in my arms, it was all so different. I took her home after a few days, and to everyone’s surprise, except me, she is such a good baby.
        My mother says that it is not fair, as I need to have a baby like I did to her, crying and giving her such a hard time. She says I deserve that too for all the complaining I did during my pregnancy. Me complaining? Never! I was a picture of contentment the whole way through my pregnancy. Ha Ha!

Letter 56 Part A Background

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Hi, Shandra here,
            First off, this letter opens with the usual opening remarks, this time mainly talking about their babies. Now that Shanti has come home with her baby, she can settle down to complete her letter.
            These opening remarks in this letter are classic Anne. She managed to put in so much of herself, her thoughts, her attitudes, the way she speaks, and not forgetting how she feels about some of her relations, too. When we mentioned it to Anne, she denied it, saying it is just the way Shanti in the story would act. But of course, we know different, don't we? Fictional Shanti has the personality of the real Anne.

            The original version of this Letter was actually planned to cover the Crocodile Hunting story and Story Night in one, shorter letter, but as we began writing it became clear this wasn’t going to happen. The decision was made to split it into two stories, having the hunting story in the first letter and Story Night in the second. Since Shanti was due to have a baby, we then came up with the idea of her dropping the letter and rushing off to have her baby and then returning to complete the story later. As Kim explained last week, we popped a short letter in, a reply from Joseph to give the impression of some time passing between her two letters. This is how it remains today.
            Now, for the purpose of online publishing, we further divided Story Night into three sections. I will be your guide for this opening section – Part A, then Anne will tell you about the first stories they talked about in Part B. Finally, Susan will complete the stories and round off the Letter in Part C.
            In the end, this Letter has involved the whole team of writers. It was originally written by Anne with a lot of input from Susan, Allan, and me. Then, recently, as we were preparing it for publishing online, Kim, Ayaka and Rajah became involved as well.
            So who wrote this story? All seven of us did. Ha Ha.

            The really big scene in this section begins when one of the servants, a girl called Katrina, is delivering drinks. She was the servant who caught Mike standing up on the diving board, totally nude, a few days before. See the end of Letter 52 Part B There is a brief exchange between them where Mike says ‘sorry’ for the other night and Katrina says she is Ok about it now. But then she adds something which I think is rather bold for a servant. She says, “I think you are a handsome man.”
            Well, after Katrina had gone, Lizamoa quickly picked up on this and began teasing Mike. We wanted this to be funny and maybe just a bit naughty with one of the men giving her a feel-up and perhaps slapping her bare bottom, but then Susan became involved, and it quickly turned into a hot little sex session.
            Recently, our new writing team of Kim and Ayaka had a go at it too. They have a different way of doing conversations. They role-play them. To see how effective this works, you might like to go back and compare the first two conversations of Letter 48 Part A. The first one was written by Allan, and the second one was written by Kim and Ayaka. See the difference.
            Now, back in this letter, Kim and Ayaka also added that little bit where Lizamoa acts like she is a little girl and calls her husband “Daddy Joseph” and Mike “Uncle Mike.” The first time they used this was in Letter 52 Part B, when they were at the club. Since it worked so well there, they decided to try it again here. When Anne saw the completed version, she loved it.

            Now, just to add a bit of mystery, when Amita and Sarvesh went to get the drinks, she returned to get Mike. He went off with her. Why did they need him? Find out next week.

            Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        Shandra.

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Letter 55 We Will Keep the Hunting Story.

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From Joseph,            
The Game Reserve,                
Andhra Pradesh,                    
India.                        

            To Shanti,
                Titirangi,
                    Auckland,
                        New Zealand.

Dear Shanti and Mike,
        Yes, Shanti, this confirms it, you are different from most women. Here you are when most women would be rushing to get to the hospital because their baby is coming, but not you. You are continuing to write your letter to me.
        Then your Mum drives you to the hospital, and you arrive with the contractions almost continuing. A few hours later, and it is all over.
        Lizamoa says it is not fair. It was so quick, too. She spent many hours before our baby, Jagash, was born. Well, at least there will be no more waddling ducks and beached whales at your house now. Ha Ha Ha.
        Well, we must wish you both congratulations on the birth of your daughter, Kathy. We received the photos in your email, and we are thinking she is a very pretty girl. She is a beautiful colour like honey, not white and not brown. This is like the colour our son is too, which makes Lizamoa and me more certain that I am not the natural father.

        What are we going to do with you, Shanti, regarding your comments about Indian males? Why do you have such a low opinion of us? I am thinking it is that rebellious nature of yours shining through again.
        I would suggest to Mike that he put you over his knee and spank your bare bum, but knowing you, you'd probably enjoy it. End up having an orgasm or something.

        I agree that the story you told was not like the others as a sexy story. But I agree we could still keep it in the book. Somehow, I am thinking that seeing a girl hunting is a bit sexy, too. Usually, women in India are not like that. I am surprised that Lizamoa wanted to come and watch too.
        I think Lizamoa admires you, Shanti and would like to be more like you. But I, myself, do not think this would be a good idea because one ‘Shanti’ is more than enough. With two, I do not be thinking Mike and myself could be handling it. Ha! Ha! Ha!
        Yes, Shanti, I will allow you to keep this story in our letter book.

                Bye for now,
                        Love from,
                                From Joseph and Lizamoa.

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Letter 55 Background

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Hi, it is Kim here.
            Yes, I know I didn’t write the original letter; Susan did, but I’ve been asked to take Anne’s notes and do this background since Susan is involved in another story.
            We ended letter 54 with Shanti dropping her letter and rushing off to the hospital to have the baby. Later, her husband Mike finds the letter and sends it to Joseph and Lizamoa.

            During the writing and theme development through this section, we wanted to create a sense that some time had gone by between the first half of Shanti’s letter in Letter 54 and the second half in Letter 56. We did this in two ways. First, we added this short letter from Joseph showing that they had time to reply before Shanti sent her second part. We also added the detail that Joseph and Lizamoa already knew she had a little girl and had even seen photos of her via email and the internet. (Another indication of Letters changing from a correspondence to a series of stories.)
            Joseph notes that little Kathy is a similar colour to their son. Indian babies are usually a lot darker with both Indian parents, whereas both of these babies appeared to be of mixed race between an Indian and a European. This confirms even more that Mike might be the father of Lizamoa’s baby as well.

            The final major point of this letter is that Joseph agrees that the crocodile hunting story should remain in the letter books. He also says he thinks a woman being able to hunt is a bit sexy, too. This is probably why he agreed to keep the hunting story. Did you notice almost his last sentence? “Yes, I will allow you...” I have not seen Letter 56 yet, but I bet Shanti picks up on that one, too.

            Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        From Kim

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Letter 54 Crocodile Hunter.

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From Shanti,            
Titirangi,            
Auckland,            
New Zealand.            

            To Joseph,
            The Game Reserve,
            Andhra Pradesh,
            India.

Hello to you, Joseph, Lizamoa and Ragesh.
        Hi from New Zealand again.
        We are still doing very well. I have quit work for a while to have the baby. I’m now five days overdue. Mike said she must have heard me moaning about how much I like being pregnant, and she is staying in there longer just to teach me a lesson. Anyway, the doctor said that if nothing happens soon, they may need to help things along or even in the worst case, take the baby.
        Congratulations on the birth of your son. We were so pleased to read that everything went well when we received your email. It was even better on Sunday when you talked with us on the phone.
        It is very interesting that the baby is a lot lighter in colour than normal Indian babies. Like you said, often babies are first a bit lighter in colour soon after they are born. We will have to see how he looks after a few months, but I can’t help wondering about what you told us concerning the possible father.
        Yes, Joseph, you kicked my arse that time. I will try to 'refrain from comments about Sarvesh or Indian males in general. Well, maybe I might 'accidentally' slip in a little comment when you are not looking. Ha! Ha!

Letter 54 Background.

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Hi, Anne here.

            First off, we needed to get this baby thing out of the way. The letter mentions that Lizamoa has had her baby, and Shanti tells us that she has stopped working until the baby arrives. She also says the baby is now overdue just to teach her a lesson for complaining. We had been playing with this baby theme for a while, and so I decided we had to end it. Notice how Susan did this at the end of this letter.

Now on to the story.
            We were going to do a second picnic beside the lake, but as I began writing, it was turning out too much like Shandra’s story back in Letter 49. So, I decided I wanted something different, and this is what I ended up with.
            This was the second trip into the Game Reserve, but this time things had changed. A large crocodile had decided to take up residence at the small lake and was killing the animals. The decision was made to hunt and kill it.

            So, where did this crocodile-hunting idea come from, and how did it get into a collection of sexy stories? At about the time this letter was written, Allan had taken me hunting for the first time. When he asked me, at first I wasn’t keen, although Susan was, so I decided to go along with them. Then Allan said something which changed my entire view of this hunting thing. He said he thought a woman who could hunt was kind of sexy. So I had a go and was soon enjoying it, not that I was much good at it.
            Now the next problem was concerning the hunting in India. In New Zealand, we hunted rabbits and goats on Allan’s uncle’s farm. But then hunting these was not particularly exciting. We want something more exciting and probably more dangerous.
            Our first choice was, of course, a tiger. Maybe it could be a tiger killing the rare animals in the Game Reserve. Then we learnt that tigers were very rare themselves, and being almost totally protected, we thought even in a story killing one might not go down too well. So we decided on a rogue crocodile instead. Again, I am not sure if they would kill a crocodile in a Game Reserve, but then it makes a good story, doesn’t it?

Later Add-Ins:-
            Later, we managed to work in a remark by Joseph that Shanti is always surprising him. He thought maybe she should have been a boy. We also added a bit where Shanti and Mike were riding in the back of a truck, where they had a conversation with a man called Mootie. Remember this man, he will play an important role in many of the future stories. We will learn more about him and who he actually is in Letter 56. If you look ahead on the Index Page, you will see his name a few times. This was also a good chance to add an insight into Shanti's lack of ability to speak any language other than English.
            Finally, Susan added that little bit at the end where Shanti has to leave off the letter and rush to have her baby. This is the part where Mike finds and finishes the letter for her, then sends it off to India.

            Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        From Anne.

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Letter 53 Nude Day Two.

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From Joseph,            
The Game Reserve,                
Andhra Pradesh,                    
India.                        

            To Shanti,
                Titirangi,
                    Auckland,
                        New Zealand.

Dear Shanti and Mike,
        Hello, from India. Thank you for the good letter and, not to forget, the well-written out story as well. Here we are in India, in good health and happiness, and we hope to hear that you are also.
        Lizamoa is due any day now. It is good that my mother is staying with us, and she can help Lizamoa as I am unknowing of a lot of these things. Any day soon, I will be getting the call telling me what is happening, and then I will take some leave to help when the baby is new. It is not always common for the men in India to be very involved with the children, but after talking with you and Mike, I have made my mind to be very involved in every aspect of our children. (Please note, Shanti - I used the word 'our' and not 'my.')
        We are both amused by your description of yourself as pregnant. Waddling like a duck and sitting like a beached whale, is very funny. Ha! Ha! I had to laugh so much. Surely it is not as bad as all of that you are saying.
        Shanti, you always surprise me. Why do you always have to be so different, so stubborn and headstrong? You are always thinking differently to what others think. You dress against what your mother wanted you to, even on your wedding day. You decide who you will marry yourself, although I must be saying you made the correct choice there. Now, when all women should be happy to be pregnant, you are complaining about being too fat!
        Lizamoa says maybe it is all those years when the speech you were having problems talking had put you down. Now that problem is seldom there, you are now showing the other personality that was kept hidden, kept subdued inside.
        Now, Shanti, I must say I do not approve of your comments regarding Sarvesh, his castle on the mountain and his empire building. Sarvesh is a good man and doesn't deserve you taking pot-shots at him like that. Please refrain from this in future letters.

Letter 53 Background

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Hi, Shandra here.
            I will be doing the background of this letter since I wrote most of it. But before I begin, I want to make a couple of points about this letter. First, I know that with stories that are this long, other writers get involved as well, and it happened with this letter, too. It seems that more and more we tend to do this, adding to each other’s work. But it makes for better stories, so why not?
            Secondly, this letter is a very old story, by that I mean it was written when we first were working on this section of Letters and unlike many other stories, we have never gone back to improve or update it. In particular, the game could do with either another game or some major reworking, but this has not happened. More about that below.

            The story starts with a bit of fun from the guys as Amita is telling them what she has planned for the day. It was at about this time that I heard Allan’s uncle use the word “nooky.” It is a very old slang name for sex. I liked it, and so I added it to my story. When the girls read it, they were really amused too. So for a while, there were heaps of “nooky” jokes between us before we moved on to something else.

            The next interesting event happened when they were about to get into the pool. This is again actually based on something that happened with us, too. Let me just describe the scene first because many of our real sexy adventures happen in this place. Up the back of our farm, a stream runs down a steep valley through an area of trees and bush. At one place, the stream goes over a waterfall and into a nice, deep pool below. This pool is over my head near the waterfall. It then goes between two flat rocks and over another smaller waterfall before continuing on down through the farm. Beside the pool is a nice grassy area where you can have a picnic or anything else you might decide to do after swimming nude in the pool.
            A group of us were sitting naked, eating our lunch after a swim, when the subject of skin colour came up. With the three of us each being a different race (Indian, Japanese, European), our skins and bodies are a bit different in many small ways, too.

            Suddenly, Susan jumped up, pulling me up too. She then described the various parts of my Indian body, pointing them out as she did. The others sitting watching were laughing and enjoying the fun. To end, she pushed me off the flat rock into the pool. Then Anne jumped up and did something similar to her, except Anne even reached down and pulled open the lips of her pussy, showing the pink inside. Like me, Susan ended up in the pool.
            This was followed by a conversation in which we decided to use this in the story I was writing. First, we had Sharon and Steve do it, and then they were followed by something a little bit sexier with Sarvesh and Amita. Meanwhile, we fitted in some comments made by men among those watching. I think this part of the story really works well.

            Now we get to that game. This is the part of the story where we struggled. I think the description is too drawn out and clumsy. I have tried to inject a bit of fun in various places, but I’m still not happy with it. But now the publication date has almost arrived, and it’s still not how I would like it. At last week’s meeting, Anne and Allan said they would have another look at it; otherwise, it might end up being published the way it is.

            Next week, we go back to the little lake at the Game Reserve, but things turn out very differently from the first time we were there.

Update 2025.
            During our site update in August 2025, we were working through this part of the story, upgrading the Index and visiting each post to work on coding and text. As mentioned above, this story needed work, so we gave it a workover, doing as much as we could to make it more interesting and readable.
            Now, we still have the main story, which hasn't changed, but now there is extra flirting and teasing to make it more fun. We also managed to work in a growing attraction between Steve and Anita, which led to them being together by the end of the story.
            Later, in November 2025, Allan snr we doing some work running our earlier stories through Grammarly and making some improvements where he could. This story got a lot of work from him and his coding team.
            So now the list of authors grows longer. Shandra (the primary author), Anne and Susan (who helped finish it), and Allan Jur, who worked on the conversations. In 2025, Mary and Kim got involved. Then, later in 2025, Allan Snr, Rita and Nina worked on the story, too. So that makes nine authors, now.

            Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        Shandra.

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Letter 52 Part B The New Zealanders Arrive.

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Part B – Fun At the Club.

Hi from Shanti again.
        On the way to the club, there was lots of joking among us in the back of the van. It was then that Steve was teasing his mate, Peter.
        “So was Amita's pussy as good as you expected?” Steve asked.
        “What, Steve?” Amita gasped.
        “Oh, Peter wants to see you with your gear off,” Steve laughed.
        “Steve!” Sharon said. “Can't you keep that big mouth shut?”
        “What is he talking about?” Amita asked, looking a bit confused.
        “Peter wants to see what you look like without clothes,” Liz explained. “I think he likes you.”
        “Does he? Well, he is a naughty boy!” Amita said.
        Then, to our surprise, Amita turned towards a very embarrassed Peter and asked, “What do you think of my pussy, Peter?”
        “Well... I was only...” Peter tried to say.
        Amita cut in, “You wanted to see my pussy. Did you like it?”
        “Yes! Yes,” Peter said.
        “Well, tomorrow I will be naked so you can get the full picture,” Amita laughed. "And I'm going to view your cock, too.”
        Wow! These two. They were so bold!

Letter 52 Part B Background

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Hi Allan here now:-
            Since Susan and I wrote this whole letter together, it is now hard to tell which bits were hers and which were mine. When Anne decided to cut it into two parts for publishing online, Susan and I decided to do a background each.

            As Part B starts, we pick up the story again as they arrive at the club. We saw the club scenes as a great opportunity to develop the personality of Sarvesh. In the story last week, Amita let slip that they actually owned half the club until Sarvesh rebuked her.
            We wanted Sarvesh to appear humble with his friends, treating them as equals. But behind that, we wanted to show that here was a very wealthy man with a strong personality. He expected things done and done his way, too. Look at the way he overturned the arrangements with the club and notice the service and attention the club staff gave to him. There can be no doubt that Sarvesh was a very important man in this small town.

            Now in our house here on the farm, there is always a steady flow of jokes and one-liners passing between Susan and I, sure, the others get involved, but not as much as us. We wanted to inject some of this style of humour into our writing too. Anne said it would make things a lot more fun, especially in those stories that were not so sexy.
            The steady flow of joking between Steve and Peter, with a bit from Mike, will continue through the rest of the Letters Series. Steve, in particular, regularly gets into trouble with his wife for this, which is what happens in this letter, too. We believe this joking between friends is what you would expect in a close group such as this.
            In a future story, Steve will overdo the joking so much that two of the girls finally decide to teach him a lesson. Their payback is so effective that they end up getting into more trouble than he was in. But that is a story for some time in the future.
            Kim and Ayaka added some interesting conversation between Lizamoa and her husband. When he tells her she has been a naughty girl, she acts like a naughty little schoolgirl about to be punished. The way Joseph and his wife slipped into this amusing role-playing gives the impression that this might be something they have done before in their private sex life.

            Now, after they went to the cultural show and had a bit of pussy flashing, they ended up back at Sarvesh’s house, out beside the pool. Suddenly, they decide to go skinny dipping. There they are all naked in the pool when Katrina, one of the house staff, arrives with the drinks. It is a bit embarrassing for both her and Mike, who she caught standing stark naked on the diving board.
            Keep an eye out for Katrina in future stories. She will become an important character in some of the later volumes. If you want to cheat, you could scroll down the index page and see how many times her name appears.

            Next week, we will see what happens during the Nude Day they hold at the big house.

            Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        Allan.

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Letter 52 Part A The New Zealanders Arrive.

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Part A – And They Are Ready to Party.

From Shanti,            
Titirangi,            
Auckland,            
New Zealand.            

            To Joseph,
            The Game Reserve,
            Andhra Pradesh,
            India.

Hi Joseph and Lizamoa,
        Hi from New Zealand again. We are still doing very well here. I have quit work for a while to have the baby. I’m only a month and a half away now. How is it going with you, Lizamoa? You must have less than a month to go now.
        I know you are enjoying being pregnant, Liz, but I don’t like being so big. When I walk, I waddle like a duck, and when I sit on the couch, I feel like a beached whale. I will be glad when it is all over and this baby arrives. I am looking forward to having the baby, though that is going to be nice.
        I was talking to the head ranger up at the Park Centre, and they are going to make you a job offer soon, Joseph. They should have contacted you by the time this letter arrives, so you should have your application sent to the Immigration Dept. by now. It is looking really positive for you now.

Letter 52 Part A Background

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The New Zealanders Arrive.
                        And They Are Ready to Party.

Hi from Susan.
            So this is Part A of another two-part story. We wanted to launch this volume off to a good start, so it meant the two couples from New Zealand had to hit the ground running. And yes, as you can see by the title of this letter, they did arrive in India ready to party.
            I teamed up with Allan to write this story, and because Shandra had done a similar story about the photo albums back in Letter 45, we decided we would do a better one. But then that was not how it worked out in the end. After a writer's meeting, our story evolved into a much larger one, covering a number of different subjects instead of just the one.

            First, of course, the two New Zealand couples arrived and were put up at the big house on the hill overlooking the town owned by Sarvesh and Amita. The idea behind this was so we could use this house in several future letters/stories. In fact, in a future story, we will actually hear what one of the house staff thought of the arrival of these New Zealanders.
            The following day, there was a tour of the town followed by an afternoon looking at the letters and photo albums. In the end, we didn’t spend much time covering this since it would have been a repeat of Letter 45
            The rest of Part A is taken up with the girls dressing for the night out at the club. This was another story that could easily be a repeat of Letter 46, so we changed things as much as we could. Notice all the girls decided to wear sexy dresses or skirts with no underwear underneath, so you just know next week’s story is going to be some fun. Also, notice that Amita wanted in on the evening as well. Of course, the guys got the girls to flash their pussies before they went out.

            Next week, we will see what happens when they get to the club. Judging by what happened last time in Letter 46, it should be a lot of sexy fun. But, be warned, Part B also has a surprise ending.

            Bye from Susan.
                  Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                        Be safe - Be strong.

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Letter 51 A Three-some for Mike.

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From Joseph,            
The Game Reserve,                
Andhra Pradesh,                    
India.                        

            To Shanti,
                Titirangi,
                    Auckland,
                        New Zealand.

Dear Shanti and Mike,
        Hello from India. This is Lizamoa writing because it is my task this time to be telling the story. It is what happened when we had the threesome evening at Amita’s house. So Shanti, while you and Joseph were with Sarvesh in one part of the house, I was with Amita, and we were having the love games with Mike in the guest house. So it is to me to be the storytelling of this letter.
        Thank you for a good letter and not to forget the well-written out story as well. I have come to enjoy you with the good storywriting you are doing. It is good that you are sending the typed letters, which can be fixed into our copy of the letters book already. It is also good that you are returning the typed copy of our letter each time we send one, so we can include this also in the book with the same type. I like the typing you have chosen for me. It is looking like a beautiful handwriting. Thank you, Shanti. I wish I could write as good as this in reality.
        Here we are in India, in good health and happiness. We are hoping to hear this from you also. Things are going well for us here. With Joseph’s mother staying at our house, I do not have so much with the housework to do.
        There is one surprise with Joseph. He has followed Mike’s example and started doing some cooking. I knew he could because when he was living alone, but he had never done this since when we were married, and now he wants to. It is fun when we do something like cooking together. He is smiling and laughing, so I know he is enjoying it, too.

Letter 51 Background

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Hi, it's Sandra.
            We wanted a sexy story to finish this volume. I knew Anne had already started on her story. There is always that competition between her and me, so I wanted my threesome story in Letter 50 to be much better than hers, so I went all out to do the best I could. I will let you be the judge as to which one turned out the best.

            To begin this story, I decided to take it further back to the point where Lizamoa and Joseph first got the idea for this evening. Like Anne said when she was talking about us writers last week, the idea came from what Joseph did with the two European girls in the second Ripper Stripper Party (Letter 36)
            Anne also never mentions how they decided which place they would get for their threesome. We had the idea of using the master bedroom in the house and a small guest house beside the pool. In the story, Sarvesh tossed a coin to decide. Well, that happened for real as well when Allan tossed a coin to decide which location Anne and I would get for our stories. I lost, so I ended up with the guesthouse.
            Well, during the course of writing this story, the little guest house ‘accidentally’ got a rebuild from not much more than a one-room sleep-out into a fully self-contained house. It now comes complete with a three-person shower, a spa and a massage table. I wonder how they got there. So that “Ha! Ha!” in my story was partly meant for the real Anne as well.

            The first sex scene of the story takes place in the shower. Notice how Lizamoa strips Mike completely and then pulls him under the water, still wearing her sari. Notice she even takes the time to defend herself regarding taking a shower with her clothes on.
            It is at this point that Amita enters the story. Coming into the shower room, she joins them in the shower, also still wearing her sari. Yes, you guessed it, she pulled a 'Lizamoa' on Mike.

            The next part of my story was the salt massage. The real Allan, Anne’s partner, is very hairy all over his body. I like this. I like running my fingers through the hairs on his chest. (My Rajah has almost no hair on his chest.) Well, one day I heard about a salt massage that was good for hairy men, so I wanted to try it with Allan. When I told the other girls, Anne and Susan joined in, and we gave him a salt massage. Afterwards, Allan said his skin felt so alive and sensitive. So I decided that this would be great for this story since Mike in the story is also a very hairy man. When the girls saw my story later, they thought this was a great idea too.
            After the salt massage, they gave him a soak in the warm spa, then they gave him a rub with some sweet-smelling oil. Now they were ready for the bedroom.

            When I came to the bedroom scene, I was undecided on how this would go. As you may know, I sometimes have trouble writing sex scenes because I don’t know how to start them. But once I get going, they usually go OK. This is because, in real-life sex, I usually let my sex partner decide how we are going to do it. It usually works out well for me that way, too.
            I talked with Susan because I didn’t want to get Anne involved. She suggested we could try a few of our ideas with Allan. It just so happened Anne was unable to have sex for a few days (her monthly), so we asked her if we could borrow him to help us ‘research’ my story. During the night, we pretty well worked out every detail of how these sex scenes would go. I even made a few pages of notes, too. Thus, aided by my notes, I quickly had more than enough material for my story.
            The next morning, Anne asked us how our research went. We wouldn’t tell her too much; instead, I told her she would have to wait to read the completed story.

            So to finish the story, the next morning they tell Mike about the Nude Day. I didn’t bother going into this because I knew my story had grown long enough already. I also knew Anne was covering some of this in her story. Looking at it later, after reading her story, maybe I should have added some Nude Day fun, but then what is done is done, and I wasn’t going back to change the story then.
            Finally, I put in that little exchange between Mike and Shanti when she kisses him and smells him. He wouldn’t tell her why he tasted salty and sweet, which sort of reflected the mystery we had by not telling Anne what was in my story. Later, when Anne did read my story, she quickly added a version of that little exchange into her own story as well, which kind of links our stories together again at the end.
            This has been a long background – almost as long as a story, but I have one more thing to tell you before I finish. This is the last letter of Volume Three. In the first story of Volume Four, the other two couples from New Zealand arrive. It soon will become very clear they are ready to party! Hope to see you all again then.

            Cheers from Shandra.
                  Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                        Be safe - Be strong.

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Letter 50 A Three-some for Shanti.

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From Shanti,            
Titirangi,            
Auckland,            
New Zealand.            

            To Joseph,
            The Game Reserve,
            Andhra Pradesh,
            India.

Hello, Joseph and Lizamoa,
        Hi from New Zealand again. Here we are, both still doing well, although now that I am showing, it will not be long before I will need to give up work and prepare for when the baby comes. How are you doing, Liz? I think that you should have only a couple of months left, now.
        We both enjoyed the story about the picnic in the game reserve. That was a beautiful place with all the animals and that lovely lake. We enjoyed your tour so much, Joseph. Thank you for that. Mike still says seeing the elephants was one of the highlights of his trip to India.
        Then, when we had the picnic and the fun that went with it. It was a surprise that we each ended up doing a sex show. I think this was very bold for the other two couples, especially since I’m not sure your friends have ever done anything as bold as that before. But they did well too, and we were all involved, and all had a lot of fun.
        And the best part about all of this is that we have some great photos, too. We enlarged and framed the photo you took of us before we started taking our clothes off. It is such a great photo of us with that beautiful lake in the background that we have put it in pride of place hanging over the fireplace in our lounge. Of course, the other sexy photos are only for our personal sexy albums for us to enjoy.

Letter 50 Background

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Hi, Anne here.
            We have now reached the closing stories of Volume Three. In this letter, I will tell you about the special evening that Joseph and Sarvesh arranged for Shanti, and then next week we are going to read Shandra’s version of the special evening that Lizamoa and Amita arranged for Mike.
            As usual, this letter begins with comments on other matters, such as the pregnancies both girls were experiencing. Shanti also talks about the previous story written by Joseph about the picnic and a sexy afternoon by the lake.

            I am not going to waste too much time telling you about where the idea for the threesome came from, except to say it is based on the sex show written by Joseph in the second Ripper Stripper Party of Letter 36. What I want to talk about is how we came to use it in these letters. We were reading that story one day, and Susan said she would love to try having a threesome.
            Suddenly, I had an idea.
            I looked over at her and said, “Well, why don’t we?”
            “What?” she asked in surprise.
            “Let’s have a threesome with Allan,” I said. Then, looking at Allan, I added, “That is if you’re OK with it, Allan.”
            “Sure,” he replied.
            Typical of him. He's always full of enthusiasm like that!
            So that’s where this idea started. Susan and I did have a threesome with Allan, and since Shandra was there too, she watched for a while and then joined in giving Allan a great blow-job to help him ‘recover’ after both of us. So it sort of became a foursome, didn’t it?

            After the bedroom fun, we stayed at Allan’s house for dinner. Over the meal, the idea came up of doing these two stories. I quickly grabbed my pad, which by then I always carried and began making some notes. During the next hour, the outlines and some key points of both stories were written. It was then just left for Shandra and me to fill in the details, making them into these two stories.
            There has always been a competition between her and me, and we agreed that we would do these stories ourselves. Since then, both stories have remained untouched by anyone else, although we have revised them a few times. Even our editing team, Kim and Ayaka, are not allowed to touch them. Which do you think is the best?

            The first point I wanted to cover in this story was the house where Amita and Sarvesh lived. Just now, I was reading the notes I made in my diary, and I have written that we should use this story to set the scene for the many stories to come that we know will take place in this house. I also noticed a note saying:- “Build on the idea that Sarvesh is a very wealthy and successful businessman.”

            Since this evening was a surprise for Shanti, we wanted it to be a slow build-up for her, to the point where she discovers what the evening is really all about. We did this by having Joseph undress Shanti in the bedroom, taking the chance to get her sexually excited at the same time. Once they are both naked, Joseph opens the sliding door, and there is Sarvesh in the spa pool. They then tell Shanti what is in store for her that evening. Suddenly, she realised she was in for a threesome with these two guys. It appears she has no objection to that either.
            I will not go over the sex scenes that follow, except to say that after warming her up in the pool, they soon have her back in the bedroom again. What follows is hot and sexy before they fall asleep together. The next morning, there is some more sex followed by Shanti and Joseph in the shower together.
            It is then that Shanti discovers another surprise for her and Mike. They were having a Nude Day, and there was no need for clothes the whole day. After breakfast, there is an account of the day’s events. Notice I did manage to get in some teasing of Shanti over a ‘dream’ she had, too.

            Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        Anne.

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