Letter 57 Extra Story Four

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Story Four - Jeevan and Shanti

            This is the fourth of the six stories following the dominoes game. Since these stories do not actually fit in with any of our letters we have left them as separate stories in the book without letter headings but since Joseph wrote about playing the game we could consider them to be under the general heading of his letter and called the Letter 57 extras.  

Shanti:- There was general agreement all around about the selections which had been made. The only thing was I felt a bit sorry for Mike, as after putting all the work into arranging this evening he was not going to take part. I almost decided to ask Jeevan if he could join in with us but then I knew Jeevan was happy to be spending the night with me alone and I didn’t want to spoil it in any way for him.

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         Story Four – Jeevan and Shanti.

                                                                                                  Posted by Anne.
Hi from Anne again.

        This is the second story of the dominoes series which I got to write; I think the girls gave me this one because of the difference in personalities between Shanti and Jeevan. They are almost complete opposites. Jeevan was shy and nervous, while Shanti was so bold and outgoing so I knew it was going to be an interesting challenge.

        At first, I was unsure how to do this story. Finally, I called in the other three for a brain-storming session. In the end, I didn’t exactly follow their advice but it did kind of kick start my brain. In the end, the story sort of went well and I was happy with it too. 

Now to the story.

         Things weren’t getting off to a good start and finally, Jeevan admitted how nervous he was. With some quick thinking, Shanti came up with a way of breaking the ice. She suggested that they have a shower together first. At least that would get them both naked. I think at this point Shanti might have been wondering what she had got herself into.

         Then I switched the story to Jeevan and I let him give us a detailed account of how he begins washing Shanti, his hands rubbing soap all over her naked body. This, of course, turns very sexy when he reaches her pussy. It ended with what she called a ‘mind blowing orgasm.’ Thanks Susan for suggesting I take this first scene as far as that. ‘Mind blowing orgasm,’ I like that. I must remember to use it again.

          This then got me thinking. After what had just happened in the shower it was obvious that Jeevan knew a thing or two about how to turn a girl on. What if it turned out that he was a great lover in bed too? That would be a total surprise for Shanti as well as a surprise for you readers. So that was how I completed the story. He controls the sex, reading her body as he builds them both towards their climax. She is experiencing excitement and frustration both at the same time. She has never had a lover like this before. She has never had a lover who takes so much control. It is a hot scene and works well for both of them too.       

         Just for a bit of fun at the end, I added that scene next morning by the pool where Shanti goes over to try and find out what Mike and Mandara are writing about. Shanti always wants to know what is going on and this time Mike wasn’t telling her. When she returns in frustration we can see Jeevan is kind of amused by this too. 

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Letter 57 Extra Story Three

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Story Three - Joseph and Jenny

           This is the third of the six partner swapping stories after the dominoes game. Since these stories do not actually fit in with any of our letters we have left them as separate stories in the book without letter headings but since Joseph wrote about playing the game we could consider them to be under the general heading of his letter and called the Letter 57 extras.  

Hi, it is Joseph writing and Jenny is helping me.

           The dominoes game had been closely fought by us guys and but now as I look back it was a surprise we became so competitive. Anyway, after we had finished Mandara and Mike were announcing the results.

           The third girl for Mike to be called was Jenny. I have always liked Jenny. I think she is a very sexy woman. I like talking to her too. I think she likes me too. I looked over at her and she was looking at me too. She gave her lips the little lick with the tongue. Yes, I am knowing she is wanting with me.

           Then Mandara said my name and we all knew who my love-partner was going to be.

           Jenny came over and sat beside me. She snuggled against me and I put my arm around her. Yes, I was right, she was happy with the choice like I was.

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Story Three – Joseph and Jenny.

                                                                                            Posted by Shandra.

Hi, Shandra now.

            This story is different in that I only used one person to write the whole letter. Yes, I know the plan was for both people to share the writing but I wanted something different to the other stories. Joseph does say he wrote the letter while Jenny assisted him.  

           I covered a conversation between Joseph and Lizamoa before Joseph goes off to Jenny’s room. I wanted them to feel sorry that their friend Mike was missing out. I also wanted Lizamoa to consider asking Steve if he would like to share with Mike. Following that out in the passageway Joseph did offer to share Jenny but Mike said he would be OK. Anne mentioned this in her Story 1 too. My intention here is to help build towards what Allan is writing about in Story 6 between Mike and Mandara. Get you guys thinking what is going to happen with Mike.

           At first, Jenny admits that she is a bit nervous and unsure where to start. She says except for once with Steve she has not had sex with anyone else since she married Peter. Well, that is not actually true because I’m sure you readers will remember that hot sex session she had with Joseph and Sharon at the Ripper Stripper Party. Maybe threesomes don’t count! Well, Joseph reminded her about that.

           To break the ice Joseph suggests they have a shower together first and then they can watch TV. That surprises her but sure gets her attention. It also gave me the chance to write in the little funny bit where they fight over the TV remote too. This had the effect of getting them on the bed together with their bodies close and then nature just took over.  

           The sex was good but what I really want to talk about is what happened the following morning. During an interesting conversation, they were telling each other about doing a joint strip dance at a Ripper Stripper Party. While they were talking they were using their hand to bring themselves off to a climax.

           This part of the story was based on a real event I got involved in with Allan. One Friday evening us three girls were driving up to Allan’s farm for the weekend. We were talking about the stories we were writing about spending a night with a man. I happened to mention that I would love to spend a whole night with a man again since I had only ever done it once.

            “Well, why not do it tonight?” Anne asked.

            “What about you Anne?”

            “Well, I can’t this weekend. It’s my monthly.”

            We asked Allan and he seemed OK with it, so it was arranged for me to spend Friday night with Allan and Susan have him for Saturday night.
            I was not sure that I should since Allan was my step-brother but I had done it once with him so eventually, they convinced me to do it again.
            We had some good sex that evening and then got up for a shower. Soon we were back in bed for some more sex. Why get up for a shower in between? Don’t ask. I have no idea why we did that. Anyway by the time we had finished we didn’t get to sleep until it was very late. Next morning we were awake but still in bed. He had his arm around me and I was lying back against him.

           He told me about making ourselves cum while making up a fantasy story. This sounded like something a bit different and so I agreed to give it a go. The story we came up with was having sex at a beach while someone was watching us. It was a good story, sexy too, and it had the right result for both of us.

          Talking to him afterwards we both decided to use the idea in our stories. I choose to use a scene from a Ripper Stripper Party which I thought was hot. Allan decided that Mandara should wear a daring bikini which became see-through when wet. (See story six) 
       Opps! I've given that away haven't I? Nothing is supposed to happen between Mike and Mandara in Story Six. Hope you all closed your eyes when you read that bit. Ha! Ha!

           Yes, I am happy with this story. I think it works well. I am particularly happy with the fantasy story. It is almost entirely done using conversation which is kind of neat.  

          Next week Anne is going to tell us about what Shanti and Jeevan did together. This is going to be interesting since these two characters are almost complete opposites in their personalities.

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Letter 57 Extra Story Two

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Story Two - Sarvesh and Sharon.

        This is the second of the six stories of partner swapping following the dominoes game. Since these stories do not fit in with any of our letters we have left them as separate stories in the book without letter headings but since Joseph wrote about playing the game we could consider them to be under the general heading of his letter and called the Letter 57 extras.

Hi, it is Sarvesh here.
        I am going to tell you about the night I had with Sharon and she will help me. It is sexy to have another partner for a night when you know that your wife is also happy with another partner of her own. It is even more sexy to know that the following morning we have to sit down now and write about what we did.
        I was happy with the partner selection. I do not know how Mike managed to use a game of chance to achieve such good selections. We all think he did some adjusting when Mandara and he went to the other table. But he or Mandara will never admit what they did so we just have to be happy that they made the thing right for us.

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         Story Two – Sarvesh and Sharon.

                                                                       

                                                                                                              Posted by Susan.

Hi, I’m Susan. I wrote the second story following the dominoes game.

           I knew that in some of the other stories the girls were talking about the dominoes game first so I decided to get straight into the sex story. I added that little bit of humour about them paying each other compliments which was kind of funny.

           Later Anne added Shanti’s comment:-

          Shanti: - Come on you two. Stop telling each other how good you are and get on with the story so we can judge for ourselves.

           Nice one Anne!

           My story starts with them having a shower together. Sharon wears her sexy nightie in under the water which immediately goes totally see-through. Sarvesh is rubbing his hands all over her body through the soak wet nightie before finally, he takes it off. When he tried making love to her in the shower she tells him to wait until the bedroom. I like what she said; “Slow down tiger.” He was a bit surprised at that too.

           Since Sharon has larger breasts I thought she could give him a ‘titty fuck’ which would have been a big turn-on for Sarvesh.

           I had heard that it was possible for a girl with larger breasts to make a man cum using her tits. Of course, with what I have in front I could never have done it. Anne was the same, being Asian she had smaller tits too. Only Shandra had anything near enough and I would only describe hers as a medium.

           Anyway, we decided to give it a go and see if it was actually possible. Shandra and Allan got together on the bed and he was kneeling over her with one leg either side of her body. In that position, he could place his cock between her breasts. Shandra held her breasts together so they gripped his cock and he began pumping. It didn’t seem to be working well because his cock was grabbing against her dry skin.

           “Ok, what is needed is some lubrication,” said Anne. Good one Anne! So soon, Anne and I had applied massage oil to Allan’s cock and all over Shandra’s breasts. I think we really only needed the oil between them but we got it all over them anyway.

           This time it seemed to be working. His cock was sliding smoothly between her tits as she held them together. I was beginning to think that they might actually make it when she called for him to stop again. It seemed that she was pulling her tits so hard to grip him it was hurting her.

           So our attempt at a titty fuck had to be abandoned due to lacking the required equipment. Since I still thought it was a good idea and so I went on and included it in my story.

           The sex which followed then, and again in the morning, is nothing spectacular. I tried to make it a bit different but there are only so many ways you can describe two people actually having intercourse. I think the whole story turned out OK. At least it achieves what I set out to achieve anyway.

           Next week we have Story 3 in which Joseph and Jenny get together for their night of fun. Let’s see how well Shandra does with her story.

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Story One – Peter and Amita.

        This is the first of the six stories of partner swapping following the dominoes game. Since these stories do not actually fit in with any of our letters we have left them as separate stories in the book without letter headings but since Joseph wrote about playing the game we will consider them to be under the general heading of his letter and call them Letter 57 extras.

Hi, this is Amita.
        So, finally, I get to add something into the letters book.
        The game we played made for an interesting evening. When we picked out our numbers it would have been interesting to know which number I had picked but Mandara was not letting us see. So when the boys were playing their game none of us girls or the boys for that matter knew who we would get as the partner for the night, even if we could work out who was winning in the domino games.
        The boys played very hard and were very competitive too. When you think about it, it probably didn’t matter because Mike said he was going to probably arrange the results afterwards anyway, but still, the boys didn’t see it that way at all, instead, they were all trying their very hardest to be the winner.
        Then Mike and Mandara went to another table to find the results. I think they may have made some changes because they were away for a little while and the list of partners turned out to be too perfect to be from a chance game. They returned and were now ready to announce the results. He then arranged for us girls to be standing by Mike and Mandara. The boys were sitting at the table still with an empty seat beside them where their wives had been sitting. This seat would become for their new sex partner.
        I looked around at the men. I felt a bit nervous but it was exciting too. One of those men, any one of them except my husband would be my sex partner this night. I wondered what it would be like? Would it be good for us? Then I decided that was silly thinking. Of course, it would be good. Both of us would make sure it was good.

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         Story One – Peter and Amita.

                                                                        Posted by Anne.

Hi Anne here:-

         When we came to write these six stories following the dominoes game the stories were divided up with Shandra and I taking two and Allan and Susan taking one each. We wanted to make each of them different so since all four of us were involved in the writing it was important that we stayed informed with what others were writing. We had a few meetings discussing the various ideas being added to the different stories and shared what we were doing too.

         This communication, this interaction between us also led to ideas being swapped as well which completely changed the main theme of more than one letter. So you can see that it was no accident that the stories ended up the way they did. Some of us also took this opportunity to expand on the dominoes game too, which is something I did in Story One.    

         Now we get to the point where Peter comes into Amita’s room. First, he begins to undress her. This story was originally written with Amita paired with Steve but since these two would be paired together in some of the key stories at the holiday resort in Vol Seven it was later decided to change the man in this story to Peter. But we then had a problem here because now we had Peter instead of Steve taking her clothes off. There was supposed to have been a bit of fun about Steve making a mess of it with Lizamoa at the second Ripper Stripper Party (Letter 36) so we had to change this to Amita being surprised that a European man knew how to remove an Indian sari. In the end, it worked well. 

         This was going well until she was half undressed when she became overcome with her desire for him. Still, like that, they ended up on the bed. When she came to take her sari-skirt off in her rush she pulled the string into a knot. In her frustration, she was only making it worse until Peter took over untying the string. Just a chance to add in a bit of fun.

         The sex that followed was good. It certainly wasn’t the best sex scene we have written but then it wasn’t the worst either. Just some good sex which they both appeared to enjoy. I think what makes this story work for me is the humour of the sari-skirt which leads nicely into the sex scenes.

         Next week we are going to see what Sharon and Sarvesh got up to in their night together.   

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Letter 57 Game of Dominoes

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From Joseph,            
The Game Reserve,                
Andhra Pradesh,                    
India.                        

            To Shanti,
                Titirangi,
                    Auckland,
                        New Zealand.

Dear Shanti and Mike,
        Hello from India. Thank you for a good letter and not to forget the well-written story as well. Here we are in India in good health and happiness and we are hoping to hear you are also.
        As I was saying in our last letter to you, we were glad to hear that your daughter arrived without any problems. And also we were interested to hear what colour she was. In our case, our son is still very light in colour compared to either Lizamoa or myself. Lizamoa is now almost completely certain that I am not the father. During that time Lizamoa had two sexual partners who were European; you Mike and later, you Peter. Since you Mike were with her soon after you arrived here she thinks you are the most likely father. Even if this is true I do not mind. As far as the child is concerned I am his father and we will not be wanting to do any tests to find out for the real truth. After telling you this, Lizamoa and I have decided we will drop the ideas and not talk about this again.
        Oh Shanti, as I said last time, you are such a rebel. You want to go against everything women should enjoy. You are complaining for all of the nine months about the being pregnant. Now want everyone to have test tube babies. Ha Ha. And don’t you want your family to visit you and enjoy your baby too?
        A picture of contentment! That one is too funny. But then maybe all the beached whales and the waddling ducks are contented now too.
        Now don’t be in the rush to be getting back to your working place. But I know you, Shanti. You'll probably want to drive from the hospital straight to your working place.
        Enjoy your new baby and spend the time with her. You will not be getting the chance to be so close with her again. Children grow up so very fast so don’t be wasting this special time by rushing back into the working place. It is better if you can take their offer and be doing some work from home. I like that idea better if you must work. Now, Lizamoa has had our child she will not be working again until the child is older.
        We have both been asked to attend an interview with the New Zealand High Commission. We will be travelling there next week. My mother who is now planning to come to live in New Zealand with us will also be having the interview as well. If this goes OK then there will not be anything to stop us from going to New Zealand very soon.

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         Dominoes The Game.

                                                                                Posted by Shandra.

Hi, Shandra here.

          First some admin stuff. Letter 57 was always going to be a complex one to publish. You see it could be considered one very long letter written by a number of people or it could be divided into seven different stories. For the on-line version, we have decided to do it the second way as we also did in the printed version. We have a story called Dominoes and then a section called Dominoes Extras which contained the other six stories. So the posts over the next seven weeks can all be considered to be under the general heading of The Dominoes Game.

         The publication date was rushing up and nothing had been done about the backgrounds for any of these seven stories.
          One day Anne said, “Come on guys let’s get these done.”

          We all sat down on the deck one afternoon and in about four hours all seven background stories were written. It was a big push. Kim and Ayaka got involved too, even though they weren’t a part of the Project when the original stories were written. Even Rajah was involved as he opened seven Word files and began typing up as sections of the various backgrounds as they were completed. Late Kim was helping him as well on another laptop.

            Now about my story. So the first question you may be asking is why dominoes? I could reply to that with, ‘well why not?’ but let me explain instead. We first intended to use cards, and the stories were written using cards, but at about that time one of us had been given a set of dominoes and we were having fun playing a game called‘Chicky Foot.’

            Then Susan comes up with the idea of using the dominoes instead of the cards.

            “Why would they do that?” I asked her.

            “Maybe they can’t find a pack of cards,” she replied.

            I quick look at stories showed that with a bit of re-writing in this story and a few word changes in some of the others we could easily pull this off and so we went for it. Soon the card game was gone to be replaced with a game of dominoes. Have you ever played a game of dominoes to decide who you will be having a night of sex with? No! Then that shows what a good idea this was.

            Now Joseph opens this letter with the usual news items. Of course, the current topic seems to be babies. It appears that he is now certain he is not Jagesh’s natural father. So since Mike had sex with Lizamoa at about the time it would have happened we can fairly safely conclude that he is the father. Notice he also says they he and Liz now intend to drop the subject and not discuss it again. About time, you readers must be getting sick of it by now too.

            Joseph also can’t leave Shanti’s comment alone about her being a picture of contentment during her pregnancy. Then he laughs that at least all the waddling ducks and beached whales have gone for a while.

            The main body of the letter begins with Joseph giving us a summary of their tour through India before he settles down to tell us about their sexy adventures in the city of Madurai. First off, of course, we see Mike looking for a pack of cards. We already know where the cards went. The writers took them. Ha! Ha! Then a barman produced the set of dominoes for the game.

            When they settled down to play the game, everyone was in agreement except Mandara who was unable to have sex that night. This left them with the problem of having more men than women so Mike dropped out of the game too.

             So the order of the girls was decided using numbers pulled out by each girl. That was easy enough. They could have them done the same with the guys as well and things would have been sorted. But instead, they began playing this game. It was closely fought by the guys which seemed like a waste of time considering the results were probably going to get changed afterwards anyway.

            Part way through the game Shanti adds a little extra section where she and Lizamoa tell the barman what they were playing for. It seems like at first, he didn’t believe them until later when he was watching the results being called out and each girl going to sit beside a guy.

           Well, the game finished and they all found out who they would be spending the night with. It appears that the results were well received. Finally, Mike gave them all a surprise when he told them that they would be writing an account of their night for the Letters Book.

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Letter 56 Part C Story Night

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Part C – Nude Beach and Wet T-shirts.

Mandara – Letter 33    Going to the Nudist Beach.

It's Shanti again as I continue with my story.
        “Now Lizamoa when you came to New Zealand you were doing even more than just showing to one man. In letter 33 you are talking about going to a beach and taking the bikini top and the bottom off as well,” said Mandara. “Was this really your idea?”
        >Before she could reply, Joseph cut in and said, “Yes we were having breakfast the morning after we had played the game strip. We were talking about the evening and how we had ended up naked in front of seven other people.
        I asked Lizamoa how did she feel showing her nude body to all those people and she replied that once she had her clothes off she liked it a bit. She also said she would like to do it again too.”
        “It was then that Lizamoa surprised all of us,” began Mike. “Suddenly she began asking me about a nude beach. I told her that there was one not too far from where we lived and then she shocked us all by asking if we could go and see it. I explained to her that everyone there would be naked and she replied that she knew that. Here let me quote from the letter.”
        Mike reached over and took the letter book off Mandara. He flicked over a couple of pages and then began reading.

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         Part C  The Final Stories.

                                                                        Posted by Susan.
        The final part of this story’s background has been left to me, Susan. to tell.

        The stories continued with Mandara asking about Letter 33 “The NudeBeach.” They talked about it and then Peter suggested Mike takes Mandara to a nude beach. What they did on the “beach” was probably not what you would do on a normal nude beach but they had some fun. Well, Mandara certainly did as Mike gave her a massive orgasm. 

       The next letter was Letter 31 “The Wet-T-Shirt Contest. This was another surprise for Lizamoa when Amita produced the T-shirt shirt Liz had actually worn in the contest in New Zealand. Shanti said she was surprised that Liz still kept that. Back in that first story, she had asked if she could keep it and here she was wearing it again while Peter wet it for her.

        The “wet T-shirt contest” which followed went far beyond what would happen in a normal contest but it seems that everyone had a lot of fun doing it. At one point it looked like it was going to turn into a full on water fight when the girls turned on the two water boys, Peter and Steve, and gave them some of their own back.

        Finally once the contest was over and all six girls had been announced as 1^st equal they all decided on going for another swim.

        The afternoon finishes with Mandara asking if all the stories real. We learn from Shanti and Joseph that only a few of the very early ones were made up while the rest they claimed as being real adventures.    

         Next week we get to play a game of Dominoes. Ever played Dominoes? Well, these guys might be playing it slightly differently to how you would have played it.

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Letter 56 Part B Story Night.

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Part B - The Stories Begin.

It's Shanti again as I continue with my story.
        This was when Amita introduced the game she wanted us to play. This game was about the many letters and stories we had written. The idea was for each of our friends to pick out their favourite letter and we would tell them about the story and answer any questions.
        We had eight stories to discuss during the afternoon and early evening.

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        Part B  The Stories.

                                                                        Posted by Anne.
Hi, Anne here.

        Last week Shandra told you how the Story Night started as a short letter but evolved into two letters. The first one became the story “Crocodile Hunter.” The second one retained the name “Story Night” but was later cut into three sections for posting on this blog/site. This week I want to tell you where the idea came from and the purpose of this letter.

        First the idea of having a story night. Back in Letter 45 when Mike and Shanti arrived in India they had an evening where the letters book and the photo albums were shown to their Indian friends. The purpose of this first story was to launch the Indian Trip into some sexy adventures almost from the start. While I suggested this story, I wasn’t actually involved in writing much of it.

        So since there has always been keen competition between Shandra and me, it was only natural that I wanted to have a go at a similar story. Originally this was going to be Letter 52 where the albums were shown to the New Zealand couples but this didn’t turn out like that as we finally decided just to mention that they had seen the albums.

         So when I suggested that we do a Story Night the other girls were against it. They said it would just turn out a copy of the earlier story. But I told them I wanted to have an evening where each person gets to select their favourite story and Shanti or Joseph would tell them about it. They were still not too keen but they agreed to me having a go and see where it went.

        Once I got started the idea sort of took off. Soon both Susan and Shandra became involved with the writing. Allan then revised much of the conversation and made a few other improvements. Finally, more recently Ayaka and Kim had a go at some scenes as well. Rajah did some work too. Yes, I know what you are saying:- “Another joint venture.” And of course, you are right.

        There is another purpose for this story as well. The story provides extra material to develop the characters that will be playing major roles in the Dominoes stories. It also gives us some interesting insights into some of these earlier stories as well. 

         Now about the story itself. Amita launches the game by asking about Letter 17 The Secret Watcher at the Beach. During this conversation, they get Shanti to admit that she did actually enjoy putting on a show for that guy up on the cliff.

       Then we come to Peter asking about the Sex at the Christmas Tree Farm inLetter 43. Perhaps the highlight of this section is that exchange between Peter and Lizamoa when Liz jumps up to defend Mike and Shanti against his teasing. Originally this was just a couple of sentences until our new writer team got involved.

        They turned the conversation into a more heated exchange where Lizamoa really goes for Peter for suggesting that Mike was in any way using Shanti. Peter is a bit shocked at this and tries to back out of what he said but Liz is having none of that as she is still going for him. Finally, Joseph steps in and calms her down. I like this because I think it develops and brings out a new side to Lizamoa’s personality which we haven’t seen much of up until this point.  Good work Ayaka and Kim.

           Well, the stories continued with each person selecting a story. When it came to the ice cream story we suddenly discover why Mike was taken away by Amita. They need someone to show them how to roll an ice cream ball. The ice cream story also took things to a new level because from then on they began acting out parts of the stories. Like for example Lizamoa showing them what she was doing beside the lake in a very hot scene.

           This section ends with a short conversation which introduces someone who is to become an important character in the Letters Series. We discover that the watcher from the lake in Letter 14  “The NudePhotography Session by the Lake” is a man called Mootie whom Joseph had actually hired to work in the Game Reserve. Then Lizamoa was shocked to learn that she had actually seen him that very day and Mike and Shanti had been talking to him.

          Next week we get the third and final section of this story. You do not want to miss what happens when Sarvesh asked about the Wet T-shirt contest.

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Letter 56 Part A Story Night.

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From Shanti,            
Titirangi,            
Auckland,            
New Zealand.            

            To Joseph,
            The Game Reserve,
            Andhra Pradesh,
            India.

Part A - Lizamoa’s Naughty Pussy.

Hi Joseph and Lizamoa,
        Hi from New Zealand again. We hope this letter finds you both, sorry I mean the three of you, in the very best of health and happiness. How are you managing with the baby Lizamoa?
        Here in New Zealand, we are fine. As we told you via E-mail, the baby arrived safely and everyone is saying I had an easy time of it too. I still thought it was hard enough having to get that big head through my tiny little hole. There should be a better way than this. Maybe we could just go somewhere and they take an egg off me then Mike comes along and pours his cum all over it. Nine months later we just go back and pick up our new baby. Wouldn’t that be much simpler?
        But then again once it was all over and I was holding darling Kathy in my arms it was all so different. I took her home after a few days and to everyone’s surprise except me, she is such a good baby.
        My mother says that it is not fair as I need to have a baby like I was to her, crying and giving her such a hard time. She says I deserve that too for all the complaining I did during my pregnancy. Me complaining? Never! I was a picture of contentment the whole way through my pregnancy. Ha Ha!

Letter 56 Part A Background

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         Before the Stories.

                                                                        Posted by Shandra.
Hi Shandra here:-
         First off this letter opens with the usual opening remarks, this time mainly talking about their babies. Now Shanti has come home with her baby she could settle down to complete her letter.
         These opening remarks in this letter are classic Anne. She managed to put in so much of herself, her thoughts, her attitudes, the way she speaks and not forgetting how she feelings about some of her relations too. When we mentioned it to Anne she denied it saying it is just the way Shanti in the story would act. But of course, we know different don't we?

        The original version of this Letter was actually planned to cover the Crocodile Hunting story and Story Night in one, shorter letter but as we began writing it became clear this wasn’t going to happen. The decision was made to split it into two stories having the hunting story in the first letter and Story Night in the second. Since Shanti was due to have a baby we then came up with the idea of her dropping the letter and rushing off to have her baby and then returning to complete the story later. As Kim explained last week we popped a short letter in, a reply from Joseph to give the impression of some time passing between her two letters. This is how it remains today.
        Now for the purpose of on-line publishing, we further divided Story Night into three sections. I will be your guide for this opening section – Part A, then Anne will tell you about the first stories they talked about in Part B. Finally Susan will complete the stories and round off the Letter in Part C.
        In the end, this Letter has involved the whole team of writers. It was originally written by Anne with a lot of input from Susan, Allan, and I. Then recently as we were preparing it for publishing on-line Kim, Ayaka and Rajah became involved as well.

       So who wrote this story? All seven of us did. Ha Ha.

         The really big scene in this section begins when one of the servants, a girl called Katrina, is delivering drinks. She was the servant who caught Mike standing up on the diving board totally nude a few days before. (See the end of Letter 52 Part B) There is a brief exchange between them where Mike says ‘sorry’ for the other night and she says she is Ok about it now. But then she adds something which I think is rather bold for a servant. She says, “I think you are a handsome man.”   

         Well after Katrina had gone, Lizamoa quickly picks up on this and begins teasing Mike. We wanted this to be funny and maybe just a bit naughty with one of the men giving her a feel-up and perhaps slapping her bare bottom but then Susan became involved and it quickly turned into a hot little sex session.

        Recently our new writing team of Kim and Ayaka had a go at it too. They have a different way of doing conversations. They role play them. To see how effective this works you might like to go back and compare the first two conversations of Letter 48 Part A. The first one was written by Allan and the second one was written by Kim and Ayaka. See the difference.

        Now back in this letter Kim and Ayaka also added that little bit where Lizamoa acts like she is a little girl and calls her husband “Daddy Joseph” and Mike “Uncle Mike.” The first time they used this was in Letter 52 Part B when they were at the club. Since it worked so well there they decided to try it again here. When Anne saw the completed version she loved it.

         Now just to add a bit of mystery when Amita and Sarvesh went to get the drinks she returns to get Mike. He went off with her. Why did they need him? Find out next week.   

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